Title: Pride
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write_my_dreamsPairing: Hints of one-sided Gackt x Hyde
Genre: AU, crime, action
Warning/Disclaimer: Contains some violence. All J-Rockers own themselves, I just own the crazy people in this story.
Rating: PG-13
Chapters: 1/2 (So long I have to split it into two parts)
Summary: Hyde hates how everyone is out to protect him and wants to prove that
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I like the edits I see too, especially the one about Gackt and Hyde's night together, for some reason. Since I read most of this before, I'm really noticing how much more detail you add through your editing; I can see why it's so much work. Lol, "princess stage". Hyde should grow out his hair again, I like him best as a princess XD
I actually like the looks of Tetsu's club, it'd be cool to visit a place like that~ Oh God, when Hyde's shirt ripped I felt so nervous. It really could be very hard making sure that a tattoo stays covered all the time. I mean, you could be covered up like Hyde was, but anything could happen... Crepes, I want crepes! XD But what I'm really craving is mint and chip ice cream /random.
Oh, Hyde, why are you lying to Asagi :( I feel a bit weird saying that since I know the reason, but still.
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Is that how your editing process has always been? It does ^^ Oh, I know, he'd feel as if he was just taking a step backwards in regards to that. I don't think the real Hyde will ever grow it out very long again either, but I' satisfied with a little bit over shoulder length~
Yep, exactly, and it just sounds like you'd have tons of fun there, even if clubbing is so not my thing, lol. Oh yeah, the thorns would be a lot more troublesome. What does Asagi have a tattoo of? Me neither, but I did have some mint chocolate ice cream sandwhiches the other day; a bit more expensive, but they're better since they have no fat :)
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Um, I think so. Yeah long hair would just make him look like the damsel in distress which isn't what he wants at all. I don't think so either, but I like that length too. It suits him.
Exactly! lol not my thing either, but it'd be fun to go visit a place like that. Covering the thorns would be more trouble than it's worth. Asagi has roses on his arm - I'll send a picture in one of the emails. Oh you did? Sounds tasty :)
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Haha thank you, I loved writing Tetsu XD
Poor Asagi. And it's pink glitter, even worse. Well... he's not all that manly so he probably doesn't care that it's pink
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