A project with three parts, the first being an objective third person, the second being one of the characters involved and the third being more of an introspection. Warning: Slash
I read the first few paragraphs of this and found it incredibly wanting. I know you're going for a theme in that first paragraph, but all the jewel and precious stone words were grating and unprofessional sounding. the sentence structure was really unclear and overly wordy
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also I would like to meet the women that named their children Aurele and Callisto, but that's just a personal petpeeve. Name your characters whatever you like.
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