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wren_kt7oz

Third Christmas Challenge Fic

Jan 03, 2009 16:30

This was written for the qaf_giftxchnge challenge.
Gift Request: A humorous BJ-centric fic in which Justin gets a ghost scare
Summary: It’s post S5 and the boys have not longed moved into Britin. Brian is away on a business trip just before Christmas, and strange things start happening.
Thanks: to Em, whose encouragement and help in figuring things out ( Read more... )

fic: christmas

Comments 16

edom56 January 3 2009, 17:04:12 UTC

That was so much fun. I love a nervous Sunshine. I think that he is right, Brian is never going to let him live it down.

wren_kt7oz January 9 2009, 14:25:35 UTC

*g* I suspect Brian is going to tease him about it for a long while.

Glad you enjoyed.

alysandria January 3 2009, 17:42:14 UTC

Hilarious! loved how Brian knew the real story at the end.

wren_kt7oz January 9 2009, 14:27:35 UTC

Thanks. Yes, the "real" story of the house came to me all in a flash just as I was writing the end. I thought it was too funny not to use. Glad you enjoyed it.

janes_membrane January 3 2009, 18:25:55 UTC

I loved this. Justin is the kind of person who would think of ghosts but add Daphne and the whole thing gets really gets bigger.

But as interesting as it is for Britin to have some manifestation as its reputation the real reputation it has is much juicier.

wren_kt7oz January 9 2009, 14:29:56 UTC

Thanks. I figured alone and in a comparatively strange house, he might just freak a little. And then of course, once he and Daph got stoned ...

grneyedwoman January 3 2009, 21:18:28 UTC

I can't stop giggling! Perfect antidote for a gloomy day!
Hugs, Cindy

wren_kt7oz January 9 2009, 14:30:59 UTC

Thanks, Cindy - glad you got a laugh out of it. :)

bksbracelet January 4 2009, 01:19:39 UTC

For a moment Justin tried to imagine telling Brian that they had to move out because of a jealous ghost and gave up on that idea immediately.

What the fuck was he going to do?

Brian had bought him his dream home. “A palace for my prince,” he’d said. Justin couldn’t just say that he didn’t want to live here any more. That wasn’t an option.

So there was only one thing for it.

The ghost was going to have to go.

For me this sums the BJ relationship even when they are facing uncertainties the other partners needs are first.

I love the way Brian picked up that something was slightly off and dropped everything to get back to Justin and then did a sweep of the room and managed to sum up the situation. A sign of really knowing your partner especially as they have this teasing one upmanship relationship of each other.
The whole 'trap and release' discussion hilarious.

Another wonderful snapshot of our boys thanks Wren

wren_kt7oz January 9 2009, 14:35:26 UTC

Thanks, Chris.

Yes, it was significant that Justin's main reaction was around fear for Brian, not for himself. And as you say, that Brian bailed on his meeting to get back to Justin. I think that they really do put each other first most of the time.

Which, of course, will not prevent Brian from giving Justin hell over this one. *g*