Comments | wren_kt7oz: new story

wren_kt7oz

new story - A Pirates' Tale

Nov 13, 2005 15:25

This one was written for a Moonshadow Tribe challenge - which is why it's being posted a little late. I had to wait until it was up on the MST website. (The challenge was to write a fic about a Halloween party where there was a surprise arrival ( Read more... )

fic: halloween, fic: stand alones

Comments 44

strlingdragnfly November 12 2005, 20:45:54 UTC

Wren,

I just got through reading this over at the MST site. I love Brian and Gus being dressed in matching costumes! And damn, you really don't like Mikey, do you? (That's okay, I'm not that fond of the sniveling little creep myself!)

Anyway, great job.

Sharon

wren_kt7oz November 13 2005, 15:44:55 UTC

Thanks,Sharon. No, I really don't like Mikey, but where you would have got that idea, I can't imagine. ::g::

shadownyc November 12 2005, 20:53:23 UTC

B/J as hot pirates. I'm just picturing this and really enjoying the picture. (LOL)
I love that Gus and Justin play during the party and everyone loves it (except Mikey) and that JR can only be comforted by Brian.

...two very sexy pirates plundered each other mercilessly.

Although this is the end of a "sort of" component of "Reverberations", I would add after the above quote...and they lived happily ever after. (It's late here and I'm getting silly.)

wren_kt7oz November 13 2005, 15:46:05 UTC

I would add after the above quote...and they lived happily ever after. (It's late here and I'm getting silly.)

Nothing silly about that. :)

_alicesprings November 12 2005, 20:57:06 UTC

*loves*

You're doing such a good job of fixing CowPoo's mistakes with this alternate season 5. Mikey was such an ass. I have no love for him at all.

Great story, loved Gus, loved the costumes, loved the whole thing!

wren_kt7oz November 13 2005, 15:46:44 UTC

Thank you.

I despise dear little Mikey. Could you tell? ::g::

sandid November 12 2005, 21:57:56 UTC

Wren,

How can you not love a trio of sexy pirates. Great Halloween tale.

*izok, I'm no Mikey lvr either*

wren_kt7oz November 13 2005, 15:48:31 UTC

Thanks, Sandi - glad you liked it. And, yes, I do seem to remember you joining in the occasional Mikey hate-fest over on PCP - if not leading the charge. LOLOL

sandid November 13 2005, 16:20:48 UTC

Bawahaaaaaa - it's true. I did lead the charge a few times. Then there was S5 and I detested him all the more.

Hal did a good job. I think he learned how to act in S5. Gee, that took awhile. *wink*

asm614 November 12 2005, 23:27:40 UTC

This was fantastic, as usual. One of the things that I like best about your fic is that I can hear every single line as said by each individual character. You do an amazing job of capturing everything about them, from tone of voice to mannerisms. One of the scenes that struck me in particular was Debbie's dealing with Michael in the diner. You have Deb down to a T!!

And Brian and Justin as pirates? OMG OMG OMG, lol. Very very good!

Thanks ever so much :)

wren_kt7oz November 13 2005, 15:50:43 UTC

You have Deb down to a T

Thank you. I think. LOL

Glad that the voices are ringing true for you.

As for BJ as pirates - I can only agree with your comment!