Forthrightly's Perfect Come-on Challenge

Feb 14, 2009 19:10


Tryst
"Kami you taste good."

Mama Higurashi stopped in her tracks frozen outside her daughter's door.

"I've missed you for days.  I can't believe I left you here!"

The tray shook in her trembling hands at the hanyou's whispered words.

"Inu-Inuyasha slow down!"

"Don't move like that."

"Wait. . ."

"Oi! Wench, hold still."

The bed squeaked loudly beneath their combined weight.  Eyes wide, Mama flung open the door.

Kagome froze midscramble, half-eaten ramen held out of Inuyasha's grasping fingers.  Mama set down the tray and walked away face aflame.

"Did she think. . ."

"Keh, stupid woman. You'd taste way better than ramen."

I had to create the perfect come-on and I have to say that this was just one of many that came to mind. I wrote this one out tuesday and if I'd had more time three more would have been lined up next to it.  Just so many ideas that my naughty little fangirl mind couldn't keep up.  Hope you guys enjoy it. Took forever to cut the monstrosity down to a perfect 100 words. Was an awesome challenge though and it broke right through my writer's block!

forthrightly come on tryst

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