Comments | wraith816: 5 SG-1 Ficlets - Jack and Daniel for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/stargatefic100">stargatefic100</a></strong> (PG)

wraith816

5 SG-1 Ficlets - Jack and Daniel for stargatefic100 (PG)

Jun 06, 2006 00:36

Same thing as the last two times, yadda. Tried to hit up a bunch of the color-themed prompts because I knew I was gonna have trouble with them.
Progress: 25/100 - a quarter of the way done, go me!

( Prompt #17 - brown, PG, 246 words )

{lj} public, {fic} sg-1, {comm} stargatefic100, {fic}, {fic} sg-1: jack/daniel, {tv} sg-1, {fic} sg-1: gen

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wraith816 June 6 2006, 15:35:58 UTC

Heheh. Knew you'd like that one. ;-)

maab_connor June 6 2006, 10:56:27 UTC

those were the ones you thought you were gonna have TROUBLE with??? wow! those were really great. *is envious of your drabbling ability*

wraith816 June 6 2006, 15:38:09 UTC

Thank you!
But I did have an enormous amount of trouble...each of these represents at least an hour of staring blankly at an empty word document. Sometimes more than an hour. :-$

janedavitt June 6 2006, 13:03:09 UTC

Loved these, especially the images in the blue one and Daniel's worry in the first. And the last one made me smile :-)

wraith816 June 6 2006, 15:40:17 UTC

Thank you! :D

execknowitall June 6 2006, 15:43:14 UTC

These are fantastic, Wraith! 'Colorless' was touching and I just had to giggle at the end of 'red'.

wraith816 June 6 2006, 15:46:35 UTC

Thanks Exec!

*pets pretty boys*

advection June 6 2006, 17:28:16 UTC

The last one's so fun (I have to admit that until close to the end I was wondering where exactly they were sunburned), and I love the first paragraph of the blue one (such beautiful blues), and the black one is my favorite because of the rich metaphor, and the line The kind of dirt that seeped through skin day after day to leave its black mark on bone.

wraith816 June 6 2006, 17:38:33 UTC

I have to admit that until close to the end I was wondering where exactly they were sunburned

*snerk*
Let's see Jack try and explain that...*eg*

Glad you enjoyed them! :D