Upon Blue Wings

[benttornunbroke]

Okay, so. Upon Blue Wings is my main's story. I just updated it with chapter two a few days ago, and it's up to about 23k words! It's a realistic WoW story, hopefully reminiscent of Christie Golden's work, and slightly like Lord of the Rings or the Chronicles of Narnia or something but probly not as cool.

This story is night elf centric, with

Comments

[supensa]

I'd be more than happy to offer my services as a beta! I've beta'd for dozens of fics before in the past (though not so much recently), so drop me a line!

[ruthhall]

I'll take a look on monday when I'm starving for something adult to read and ignoring my kids requests to read the same Curious George book for the 18th time. -.-

What's a beta?

[ruthhall]

Dammit, I forgot to show off my cool new icon by Silly Walnut :D

[midnightsteel]

A beta reads through your work and gives constructive criticism. They're the second reader after the author and before the story's shown to everyone else, basically.

[benttornunbroke]

Oh, I know how that goes -- have fun with the kids!

[midnightsteel]

Bookmarked! I have all my deadlines on the fifth and sixth of this month, but I'll read through and leave a comment after that. ^^

[benttornunbroke]

Thank you! I hope you hit all your deadlines and do well :)

[supensa]

Okay. I finished reading your story and have some comments. Let me know if you'd like a beta.

[benttornunbroke]

I would love a beta! How would you like to keep in touch?

[supensa]

Email is probably best. slyder2020 at hotmail dot com and I can start betaing either later tonight or tomorrow.