concrit!
Does Tieria seem UNFIT? Not smart enough? Too bitchy? Something else? Feel free to let me know here! Brutal honesty is encouraged. If you can offer a suggestion or two as to how I might improve (keeping his current canon point of S2 episode 8 in mind), then it's all good. Anon is enabled, ip logging is off, and comments are screened. They'll be unscreened once I reply, but will stay screened on request. I'm always looking for that push in the right direction, so any questions or critique would be appreciated. Thanks in advance.
Post-update.
* = cursed
OCTOBER
"Can you not try for your sake?" [Lockon]
"You deserved it." [Nena*]
"Focus on what may still be changed." [Ion]
"Interpretation of the plan." [Regene]
"Something is wrong." [Lockon & Setsuna]
"That's beyond a physical impossibility." [Ahiru & Setsuna]
"There's no need to excuse yourself." [Setsuna & Lockon]
"It has been awhile." [Nemu]
"The likes of you." [Grell]
"Perhaps tomorrow." [Setsuna*]
"Costumes?" [Lockon]
A will not entirely his own. [Lockon*]
"Is that what they call them?" [Nemu]
"There is never a point." [Lyle]
"Only a matter of finding one." [Anew]
"Not at all." [Lyle]
"Your own kind." [Regene*]
"From a human." [Lockon*]
"We'll remember." [Anew]
"Someone has to take action." [Duo]
"What is he doing now?" [Setsuna]
"Challenges don't discourage me." [Lockon]
"Be quiet." [Amaterasu]
NOVEMBER
"You did well." [Setsuna]
"Let him go immediately." [Rin]
"Most are difficult to miss." [Lockon]
"Stress is not conductive to a full recovery." [Tohru]
"No one should be seeing this." [Lockon]
"His capture will fall with the Curse Brigade." [Flynn & Yuri]
Post-update.
* = cursed
OCTOBER
"Can you not try for your sake?" [Lockon]
"You deserved it." [Nena*]
"Focus on what may still be changed." [Ion]
"Interpretation of the plan." [Regene]
"Something is wrong." [Lockon & Setsuna]
"That's beyond a physical impossibility." [Ahiru & Setsuna]
"There's no need to excuse yourself." [Setsuna & Lockon]
"It has been awhile." [Nemu]
"The likes of you." [Grell]
"Perhaps tomorrow." [Setsuna*]
"Costumes?" [Lockon]
A will not entirely his own. [Lockon*]
"Is that what they call them?" [Nemu]
"There is never a point." [Lyle]
"Only a matter of finding one." [Anew]
"Not at all." [Lyle]
"Your own kind." [Regene*]
"From a human." [Lockon*]
"We'll remember." [Anew]
"Someone has to take action." [Duo]
"What is he doing now?" [Setsuna]
"Challenges don't discourage me." [Lockon]
"Be quiet." [Amaterasu]
NOVEMBER
"You did well." [Setsuna]
"Let him go immediately." [Rin]
"Most are difficult to miss." [Lockon]
"Stress is not conductive to a full recovery." [Tohru]
"No one should be seeing this." [Lockon]
"His capture will fall with the Curse Brigade." [Flynn & Yuri]