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melina_blue May 1 2010, 23:20:34 UTC
I was fretting and despairing over at the kink meme thinking that one of my favorites fills wasn't being updated anymore...and then I remembered that you had de-anoned and decided to check here.

Yesss! Three chapters in one sitting! And excellent as always.

I particularly loved how you presented Prussia's meeting with West. After all that happened since WW2, and given their personalities, this reads so true, full of tension and veiled accusations and even regret.

"Why are you the only one who always comes back?” He looks at Prussia with more innocence than he has the right to, like he is afraid of the answer.
“Think about it for a moment.”
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“Because you have nowhere to go little Prussia,” he says and strokes Prussia's hair. “Your brother doesn't love you as he should anymore, isn't it so?”

Ah, that broke my heart. Poor Prussia. Specially remembering his frame of mind, from Part 12:

"You've been beaten down before too, what's different this time around?...He doesn't feel like explaining to Serbia that the very important difference is that he never felt like he deserved to be beaten down before"

Lastly, are you going to keep posting in the kink meme? I'm sure I'm not the only one who misses you...

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worldwewanted May 2 2010, 14:26:37 UTC
Thanks! Hm, maybe I should update the kink meme too, I wasn't sure if anyone was reading it over there so it felt like a bother.

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