Comments | worlds_finest: A ficlet.

22by7 in worlds_finest

A ficlet.

Apr 14, 2009 01:49

Irredeemable Clark/Bruce fluff with bonus OOC Clark POV, I'm afraid.
Rated mature.
For the latest contrelamontre challenge; has jack-all to do with Easter.

( I'm sitting in my costume, on the edge of Bruce's bed, as if that way it won't actually count. )

fanfic: fluff

Comments 17

musemachine April 13 2009, 20:35:07 UTC

I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed reading this. Clark's running commentary made a potentially dire situation quite cute and fluffy. I loved his little tangents.

A really, really good read and distraction from that politics paper I have to write...

22by7 April 18 2009, 05:16:52 UTC

Ahh, thank you!

northern_star April 13 2009, 22:29:26 UTC

*giggles* Oh, this was so perfect! Sounded sooooo much like Clark! :D I loved it - wonderful work!!

22by7 April 18 2009, 05:17:26 UTC

I'm glad the Clark-voice worked :]

confusedkayt April 13 2009, 23:42:02 UTC

Hee! Your Clark voice is so awesomely chatty... I could picture his geeky little introvert grin. Letter-perfect. One detail that popped out to me was how very reportery his stream of conciousness was - always searching for the right phrase, the illuminating simile. Good job. :D

22by7 April 18 2009, 05:18:42 UTC

Yay, thank you! It's so cool you found this voice reportery. Not enough is made of that aspect of Clark, I find (Warren Ellis is one of the writers who does it justice).

tilco_cat April 13 2009, 23:54:47 UTC

I like Clark's inner thoughts! They made me giggle out loud. XD Very nice ending~~ even though it was just shy of smut *dreams* :3

22by7 April 18 2009, 05:20:08 UTC

Thanks!

ava_jamison April 14 2009, 03:19:26 UTC

I really, really love this.

Beautiful work!