National Poetry Month Challenge - Day 4

Apr 04, 2009 17:35



Jumping over candlesticks,

he spreads his legs wide,

claps his hands above his head,

lands safely on the other side.

All trades he practices,

he butchers, bakes, and even makes

the candlestick before he jumps,

and he scatters hoary flakes.

Clearly clever, he stows away

to sail the seven seas,

and while aboard he eats no fat

with his dried beans and peas.

Keen on beans, on shore he grows

a giant stalk and climbs, coming back

with the goose, the gold and glad

his mother named him Jack.

--Katherine Quimby Johnson. All rights reserved.

This one is a variation on the acrostic, with the letter starting a stanza, not a line. It's definitely a work in progress; I'm not completely happy with the last stanza, and some other lines need work. But if I'm going to post a poem a day, some (most?) are going to be unpolished.

My "Jack" poem was inspired by something extremely clever Neil Gaiman did in The Graveyard Book, but I went at it from a different angle.

poetic form, national poetry month

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