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(If Only I Don't) Bend and Break [30 Rock; Jack/Liz]

Apr 13, 2008 03:02

TITLE: (If Only I Don't) Bend and Break
CHAPTER 8
FANDOM: 30 Rock
PAIRING: Jack/Liz
SPOILERS: 2x10
RATING: NC-17
SUMMARY: ( They haven't officially dated, they kissed for the first time not even ten minutes ago and suddenly she's locked into a situation where it's obvious she's going to do it with him. This is just... so weird. )

character: jack donaghy, genre: smut, character: liz lemon, pairing: jack/liz, fandom: 30 rock

Comments 32

chameron4eva April 13 2008, 12:36:52 UTC

oh baby was this steamy. Wow, it's really hot here now.

*cough* very great chapter! this is like a love scene that I rarely see in JackxLiz. But very well done.

Can we please please have an epilouge for this?!?!?

regalish April 20 2008, 21:33:32 UTC

Hehe, thanks so much! I definitely didn't plan on going this route with them, but hey - gotta do what the muse wants, right? ;D

We'll see if the muse can come up with an epilogue. :D

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regalish April 20 2008, 21:34:05 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

stop_theworld April 13 2008, 13:59:21 UTC

Oh wow, what a fantastic finish to a fantastic series! I love Liz's adorable rambly nervousness. Her little speech about the key cards was spot-on. Also, you're so good at combining hotness and humor. Liz feels a little weird watching him, like he's putting on a show or something, but she figures it'd be even weirder if she covered her eyes. Hee! And the ending, oh the ending. ♥

I'm SO glad I checked my flist before my college road trip, LOL!

regalish April 20 2008, 21:35:11 UTC

Haha, thank you very much! I just love rambly Liz, lol.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and I hope you had fun on your road trip! ♥

stresseater April 13 2008, 14:01:45 UTC

His nose brushes her cheek almost affectionately as he rasps, "I would never try to seduce you."

Aaaagggh! The worst thing about this fanfic... is the "fic" part. :P

regalish April 20 2008, 21:35:52 UTC

Heee! I'm so glad you liked this one. Thanks so much!

csiangel April 13 2008, 14:05:58 UTC

Hot! I love Liz's uncontrollable talking, and how Jack is just silent through it :-) And I love how she isn't nervous about sex with Jack, even though she's convinced she should be.

Great conclusion! I loved this fic!

regalish April 20 2008, 22:02:25 UTC

Hehe, thanks Jac! I love it when Liz gets nervous and talks about the most random stuff, haha.

Glad you enjoyed this one! There are plenty more of them to come (oh 30 Rock, why are you so inspiring?)! :D