Another supurbly awesome chapter! I absolutely adore this story! You've got the characters down so well, and I love how Jack is so excited about the wedding. Love it! Can't wait to read more!
Aww, thank you so much! I was seriously so jittery when I first started writing this fic, because starting a new pairing, writing-wise, is kinda scary. I always worry about the characterization. It means a lot to know I'm keeping most everything in line with the characters :D
(Also? I HAD to make Jack super excited about the wedding. I kept thinking about how excited he was over the panda video and how adorable that was. Hehehe. Oh, Jack.)
A knock at the door diverted their attention, and Jack came in with a smile. "There you are. Liz, darling, I've--"
"Ugh," Liz shook her head emphatically and held up a hand as if to halt any more terms of endearment from his mouth. "Jack, really, you don't - you don't have to do that. You can just keep calling me Lemon."
Jack nodded in understanding. "Ah. Very well." He began again. "Lemon, darling, I've taken the liberty of choosing a dress for you to wear on Saturday."
You had me at darling. That is so cool! There's no stopping the Donaghy! :)
I was giggly all throughout this chapter. And I love that Jenna's so excited. (And "when are you going to start spending Jack's money?" seems exactly like something she'd say.)
Jenna is such a blast to write, and in my opinion she's one of the biggest Jack/Liz shippers out there just because of her excitement about their "date" in "Black Tie." hehehehe.
"I'd have a three-way with two Jacks."
"You need to cool it." HAHAHA. Sorry, had to quote that. One of the best Jenna/Liz exchanges ever.
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(Also? I HAD to make Jack super excited about the wedding. I kept thinking about how excited he was over the panda video and how adorable that was. Hehehe. Oh, Jack.)
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And oh my goodness, I love your icon so much! Hahaha. HUGSYYYYY. :D
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Everything is pink and sparkly and omigodlikesototallyawesome. Hee!
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"Ugh," Liz shook her head emphatically and held up a hand as if to halt any more terms of endearment from his mouth. "Jack, really, you don't - you don't have to do that. You can just keep calling me Lemon."
Jack nodded in understanding. "Ah. Very well." He began again. "Lemon, darling, I've taken the liberty of choosing a dress for you to wear on Saturday."
You had me at darling. That is so cool! There's no stopping the Donaghy! :)
Thanks for another satisfying fic. Me hearts you.
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Glad you liked this! Chapter five is being posted tonight! (in a few minutes, actually!)
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Jenna is such a blast to write, and in my opinion she's one of the biggest Jack/Liz shippers out there just because of her excitement about their "date" in "Black Tie." hehehehe.
"I'd have a three-way with two Jacks."
"You need to cool it." HAHAHA. Sorry, had to quote that. One of the best Jenna/Liz exchanges ever.
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