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Being A Donaghy [30 Rock; Jack/Liz]

Jun 28, 2007 21:53

TITLE: Being A Donaghy
CHAPTER 17: Honeymooners
FANDOM: 30 Rock
PAIRING: Jack/Liz
SPOILERS: Through "Corporate Crush"
RATING: PG
SUMMARY: ( The can was open and worms were everywhere. )

character: jack donaghy, character: liz lemon, series: being a donaghy, pairing: jack/liz, fandom: 30 rock

Comments 18

musical_junkie June 29 2007, 04:04:52 UTC

That was awesome, as per usual.
Jack talking to Dennis was amazing.
Can't wait until they're back in the same time zone!

regalish June 29 2007, 06:12:49 UTC

Hehe, thanks so much! Glad you liked this chapter. I HAD to bring Dennis back into it. He delights me with his stupidity :D

sunshine_queen June 29 2007, 04:32:05 UTC

Ewwww, Dennis!

A delightful chapter, aside from the sad slurs against the French. Booooo, Jack!

regalish June 29 2007, 06:11:57 UTC

Hehehe! Merci beaucoup!

Ne vous inquiétez pas, j'aime le francais. Mais Jack? Jack n'aime pas le francais! *giggle*

:D

majandratoo June 29 2007, 11:33:49 UTC

Yes! Haha- I have to drive to DC this morning for a wedding, and HAD to check my flist one last time. HEE!
The text messaging was pretty cute, and I like how the fact that Jack has made all the arrangements for her serves as little reminders of him everywhere.
And the Dennis run in made me lol. The best part had to be when Liz ran back to the room, expecting him to be there. That was just very relationshipy and sweet. And "I think I miss my husband."! I can only imagine what Jenna has to say about that.
Also- Your "stresseater" icon above it soooo adorable. I think that was actually the line that made me finally 100% ship Jack/Liz. <3

regalish June 29 2007, 18:24:19 UTC

Hehehe! Isn't that stress-eater thing so awesome? That pretty much cemented me as a Jack/Liz shipper too. Haha! Two stress-eaters, how perfect!

Glad you liked this one! I had so much fun dragging Dennis back into it, haha. :D

firthgal June 29 2007, 15:58:03 UTC

Oh, this was marvellous as always! My heart was beating right along with Liz's as she was racing to her hotel room. I kept thinking he was just in the lobby and was going to surprise her after they hung up! Oh, I love how they are both miserable and bored without each other, so cute! Gah, I'm all giddy now since you've updated! I swear I'm giggling for absolutely no reason at this very moment. I love this story! I am so addicted to it. And man am I in love with Jack! Can't wait for the next update!

regalish June 29 2007, 18:26:07 UTC

Awww, thanks so much! Glad you liked it, and that I was able to incite some giddiness :D :D :D

I admit, for awhile I considered having Jack show up in Hawaii to surprise Liz, but... as always, I love to draw the tension out, hehe! Call me evil ;)

More soon, hopefully! The muse is starting to cooperate and give me more chapters again, yay!

anonymousgirl7 June 29 2007, 17:44:30 UTC

Well... my co-workers think that I'm insane for giggle like an idiot to the monitor but the text messages thing, it was extremely cute and I couldn't help it.

I hate Dennis but bring it to the story was great (jealousy hint in Jack? ,I'm so crazy obsessed with the idea of a jealous Jack that I'm seeing it everywhere**maniacal laugh**)

Also are we going to hear about Colleen again?
Thanks for the update!! ^__^

regalish June 29 2007, 18:28:05 UTC

Haha! Well hey, insane giggling toward the monitor at work is ALWAYS fun, hehehe. Glad you liked the text messaging, and the Dennis stuff (I LOVE the idea of jealous!Jack or jealous!Liz, too! *giggle*)

Honestly, I hadn't really thought about bringing Colleen back into it, but I might work something in to a future chapter, if I can think up something good. Thanks for the suggestion!!

More soon! :D