"Bittersweet Chocolate" was amazing, considering how I've been YoungWoo-deprived lately. I love how they're so lovey-dubby and how fluffy it was, really. And how Youngmin joked that Minwoo bit his lip and Minwoo got all worried, that was sooo cute. I'm stuck here spazzing now... xD I'm really looking forward to your update of "Honesty and Deceit"! ^^ Thank you for sharing this! ^^
aww thank you! i'm glad you liked it hehe and that was fast! i haven't even posted it on the boyfriends comm yet! XD anyways, i'm happy that you've liked this, and i will be updating honesty and deceit soon! thank you for reading! :D
"Unlucky Love" was simply amazing. Donghyun was so dense throughout not realizing how he was unintentionally hurting jeongmin. and then jeongmin giving up by the end simply made me feel so bad for him. I really love how you write. you're really amazing.
BITTERSWEET CHOCOLATE was so fluffy :3 It was full of burning passion and just plain... burning? Is there any other word to describe it? I love how the kiss went and how the feelings were portrayed <3
UNLUCKY LOVE is my favorite though :) I am sucker for angst. The laying out of feelings of both Jeongmin and Donghyun was so beautiful. Even though I feel really bad for Jeongmin who got heartbroken, I can't hate on Donghyun because I feel really bad for him too for getting heartbroken over Minwoo. At that, I can't hate on Minwoo either because he's just totally in love with Youngmin ♥ It's just... emotions running amok :/
MUTUAL UNDERSTANDING got me all bubbly inside. It's probably because indeed, not all relationships need a label to be called real or something precious :) Words unspoken has more meaning after all.
You made me feel different emotions in these 3 fics~ I felt like crying with Jeongmin since he's my bias and all~ I wish he had a happy ending too~ I really like what Hyunseong and Kwangmin had <333 Not having a label, being subtle and clearly there's just something <333
sobbing forever at unlucky love ;________________; partially because it's the only thing i can write without wanting to throw something out the window, i'm a huge fan of angst and it's much more engaging to read than many other genres. jeongmin/donghyun has never ever been an otp and has never been a pairing i'd ever imagine, but the way you wrote it was so flawless and beautiful and... just so real. at that age, emotions are astray and hearts can feel so much, what more since love is such a potent emotion. every word really brought out the pain that jeongmin feels from donghyun's unconscious rejections; silent proclamations of love for someone that he isn't, someone that doesn't even love in return. love is selfish, love is painful, love is blind.
bittersweet chocolate was written really well too. c: to love is to commit an entire soul to another, and i could see that as clear as day with each line. i could feel how uncontrollable youngmin's feelings for minwoo are - young love is beautiful yet incredibly powerful. to love so much
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/is tearing from such the lovely comment/ ;o; omg you're too kind! THIS -flails arms at the tremendously awesome comment above- made my day. every word that you wrote about each story was exactly what i was aiming for ;___; i'm so happy it got relayed to someone like this. really. no joke. ♥
i'm thrilled that you liked this! thank you so much for reading, this and all my other fics. and a big thank you for the comment, it was amazingly detailed and... ;___; i just feel very happy. -lacks vocabulary at the moment-
just...really....THANK YOU ♥ ;o; you're so awesome
(this is shuuseieki on her fic-writing account, since my old personal one is pretty much defunct now ;o;)
omg no i'm not! ;o; i'm really only telling the truth - your writing style is amazing and i'm envious, somewhat ;u; ♥ your stories made my day! ;u; i-i'm glad my comment managed to make your day even the slightest bit better though, hehe? and i'm glad i managed to get what you wanted to convey in the stories, but you really only have yourself to thank for that - you wrote it in such a way that the emotions were so real and palpable and everything! c:
you're very welcome though; thank you for writing wonderful stories for me to read! ♥
nuuuuuuuuu you're the awesome person here ;_______; ♥♥♥
(add me on this account? c: i'm chelsea, by the way, it's nice meeting you!)
nice to meet you chelsea! (such a pretty name :D) I'm Julie :3
;o; oh gosh you're too sweet ♥
even though i wrote it, it has no meaning if people, like yourself, don't grasp what i tried to convey. so as a writer, i am nothing unless the readers understand what i write ;____; so all i can say is THANK YOU. you are seriously really kind ♥
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I'm really looking forward to your update of "Honesty and Deceit"! ^^
Thank you for sharing this! ^^
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UNLUCKY LOVE is my favorite though :) I am sucker for angst. The laying out of feelings of both Jeongmin and Donghyun was so beautiful. Even though I feel really bad for Jeongmin who got heartbroken, I can't hate on Donghyun because I feel really bad for him too for getting heartbroken over Minwoo. At that, I can't hate on Minwoo either because he's just totally in love with Youngmin ♥ It's just... emotions running amok :/
MUTUAL UNDERSTANDING got me all bubbly inside. It's probably because indeed, not all relationships need a label to be called real or something precious :) Words unspoken has more meaning after all.
It was all too beautiful ♥
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bittersweet chocolate was written really well too. c: to love is to commit an entire soul to another, and i could see that as clear as day with each line. i could feel how uncontrollable youngmin's feelings for minwoo are - young love is beautiful yet incredibly powerful. to love so much ( ... )
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;o; omg you're too kind! THIS -flails arms at the tremendously awesome comment above- made my day. every word that you wrote about each story was exactly what i was aiming for ;___; i'm so happy it got relayed to someone like this. really. no joke. ♥
i'm thrilled that you liked this! thank you so much for reading, this and all my other fics. and a big thank you for the comment, it was amazingly detailed and... ;___; i just feel very happy. -lacks vocabulary at the moment-
just...really....THANK YOU ♥
;o; you're so awesome
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omg no i'm not! ;o; i'm really only telling the truth - your writing style is amazing and i'm envious, somewhat ;u; ♥ your stories made my day! ;u; i-i'm glad my comment managed to make your day even the slightest bit better though, hehe? and i'm glad i managed to get what you wanted to convey in the stories, but you really only have yourself to thank for that - you wrote it in such a way that the emotions were so real and palpable and everything! c:
you're very welcome though; thank you for writing wonderful stories for me to read! ♥
nuuuuuuuuu you're the awesome person here ;_______; ♥♥♥
(add me on this account? c: i'm chelsea, by the way, it's nice meeting you!)
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I'm Julie :3
;o; oh gosh you're too sweet ♥
even though i wrote it, it has no meaning if people, like yourself, don't grasp what i tried to convey. so as a writer, i am nothing unless the readers understand what i write ;____; so all i can say is THANK YOU. you are seriously really kind ♥
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