[exo] natura non contristatur (nature is not saddened)

[dustyfairy]

Title: natura non contristatur (nature is not saddened)
Pairing: Chanyeol / Baekhyun
Rating: PG
Summary: a short drabble for the aideshou challenge 03

Comments

[silkekim]

At first I was like "maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, this looks loooong, something something, nature, maaah, the sun and winds and nature-stuff, maaah,", but I think somewhere around (read: "exactly from the point of:")
"He falls to his knees with a subtle thump, the moist dirt softening the land against his frail knees. His lips part with a silent sigh"
I was captured. Like... this is what happens. when you fall to your knees. Exactly. This is how you feel it physically. the subtle thump is what you hear, the moist dirt is what you feel. And if you do this, you're in a place mentally, where it's either a sigh or a cry. I just simply loved how you wrote that, because it made me feel like I did, without any big emotions, but with actions. I made me feel sad the way Baekhyun feels sad ;_;

and by then, I stopped being a brat, read it from the beginning, and really loved everything. Every little word.

[dustyfairy]

(; ________ ;) uhhh oh gosh. thank you for this. this comment just.... wow something about the way you worded this just made me read it over and over again. i feel so touched (; u ;) thank you for your generous words, gosh, im glad that this caught your eye enough for you to read it ;;

again, thank you for reading and commenting! ^^

[silkekim]

God, I must write comments far better than I write fics then, kekekekeke. But honestly, you deserve ALL THE PRAISE~!

actually, I was reading all the entries for aideshou's challenge, trying to decide which one to vote for. Already by the second fic, I was getting tired/bored though, so I was really happy when this story turned out to be something special~~

[dustyfairy]

i've been planning on reading all the aideshou fics, as well as the runandgun ones, but just haven't found the time to sit down and read most of them ;;n;; are you entered in aideshou as well? oh gosh i would love to read your story (; u ;) i'll probably get some reading time later on haha well i'm very happy to know this was enjoyable for you ;; i honestly didnt expect much with this writing tbh ^^;; thank you~~

[silkekim]

I have plenty of time, but no patience, which is almost as bad.
I am! And you're a liar, you don't want to read it, you want to re-read your own stuff, because that's freaking amazing and mine is like... half-hearted. I'm a brat though, so I'll give you the link and make you say nice stuff anyway >8D http://silkekim.livejournal.com/9136.html

[dustyfairy]

OooohHH okay. im reading this >) brb