Comments | words_by_storm: Watchmen: Byron/Nelly, PG-13

rocks_not_dead in words_by_storm

Watchmen: Byron/Nelly, PG-13

Feb 13, 2010 23:26

Title: Rupture: Phase I
Fandom: Watchmen
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Byron/Nelly
Warnings: slightly disturbed Byron, mentions of alcohol
Timeline: Minutemen, after Dollar Bill's death
Series Summary: After Dollar Bill's death the Minutemen are falling apart and Nelly tries to pick up the pieces, both for himself and for the others.
Fic summary: It is ( Read more... )

fandom: watchmen, pairing: byron/nelly

Comments 10

lady_wormtongue February 14 2010, 02:25:41 UTC

Heehee, reading this was awesome too! I got really excited when I saw you posted this to wwhjd. I'm looking forward to some smokin' hotness and/or sadness from these poor guys. :)

rocks_not_dead February 14 2010, 16:04:13 UTC

Thank youuu :) Heh, there will hotness and there will be sadness. How else could it be? lol

But I didn't post this one to wwhjd... I did post it at watchdom, but last I checked it hadn't actually been approved along with the other posts which seemed a bit weird. But yeah.

Thanks for the review. :)

lady_wormtongue February 14 2010, 17:32:41 UTC

Oops my mistake! But my excitement is not diminished, haha.

anactoria February 14 2010, 14:46:31 UTC

Hmm, this is interesting. I like the way you've started to set it up; two very different people who are both in the same situation and dealing with it in opposing ways. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

(I have to admit, "exclaimed emphatically" made me blink a bit. You probably don't need the adverb there. ;) )

rocks_not_dead February 14 2010, 15:55:46 UTC

Thank you. :)

Yeah, I know they're a bit of a strange pairing. My headcanon and plotbunnies are very insistant.

Now that you mention it, yeah, adverb overuse, maybe. I think I'll edit that. Thanks. ^^

tonks07 February 16 2010, 00:18:07 UTC

Interesing...I would never think of Byron and Nelly together. I like the way you wrote Byron here tho. I can really feel how strong his emotions are. Will there be more of this?

rocks_not_dead February 16 2010, 00:38:24 UTC

Heh, odd pair, I know. But darn, in my head, in a tragic way, it works. Which might show more in the next part.

There will be two more parts of this particular mini series. ^^

cypress_smile March 23 2010, 04:13:43 UTC

This was neat! I am excited for there to be more. :)

rocks_not_dead March 23 2010, 10:36:59 UTC

Thank you. :) I hope to write more soon.

That said, OMG your icon. I've seen that pic on deviantart. I love it to bits And I just looked at your other icons. There's Mothman art I hadnÄt seen yet. ^__^ .

cypress_smile March 23 2010, 13:01:14 UTC

I can hardly wait!

I can't remember who the artist is for this particular icon I'm using, but my other two were drawn by GnomeLiberator of DeviantArt. If you get a chance, look her up. She's got some pretty awesome watchmen stuff. I loves my mothman icons soooo.