[oneshot] Missing [post 2 of 2]

[yuki_scorpio]

First half the story is here.

Comments

[crystalusagi]

That was really, really, really good. And just. Alajfigjgi. The tone was just perfect throughout, and I wibbled for Yagyuu lots.

♥!

[yuki_scorpio]

♥ You shouldn't have been reading this, but I'm not complaining. XD

Thanks. :3

[kedi_kedi]

*flaps around madly*

awry;rseysuhw\kljetkse If you call this cheese then this is the best, most tastiest kind of cheese! \XD/

I loved it! It was so imaginative and wonderful and the tone and setting, everything was really nicely done. Yagyuu was in desperate need of a good hard hug, (or even a slap and tickle XD) but maaaaan, he made me wibble for him so much. :<

Also, Niou and Yagyuu having sex in that cage?....HOTTESTTHINGEVA *O*

*cough*

And I'd just like to say, I nearly had a heart attack when you mentioned Niou with dragonfly wings beaaaaauuuseeee, I have a WIP painting of Niou with dragonfly wings!! :OOOOOO I couldn't believe it! (I also have him with horns too, I couldn't decide which looked better) So yeah, that instantly made me flail because of the fact that you wrote him like that! ;O

Oh god this fic made me so wibbly, my brain is short circuiting....I think I need Niou to put me to sleep nao.... -.-zzz

[yuki_scorpio]

Thanks!! The story felt so, so cheesy when I was writing it. >> Glad you liked the end result!

sfhklasfhsklfh I NEED TO SEE YOUR PICTURE!!!!!

(If Niou ever puts me to sleep, it's to /put me to sleep/ for good, for killing him twice in one story. orz)

[aoiyuzu]

askjdlfjdsh GUH.

That was..... ;kljkfsad *speechless* amazing, for lack of a better word. Just EVERYTHING was wonderful. The setting, the characterizations, the creativity, just WOW. I am most definitely awed and am now all sparkly after reading this. *_______*

The sex in the cage was sooo hot. I love how intense the emotions were throughout the entire story. My heart still aches for Yagyuu. *insert flaily fangirl sigh of content* That was just freaking awesome.

[yuki_scorpio]

The characterisation was really hard (and something I'm still not sure about), so I'm really glad you said it worked for you. ♥

Thank you. :)

[crypticmadness]

;akwjelrkjwlelkwjerl I LIKED IT SO MUCH. ♥♥♥

Niou and Yagyuu sexing it up in a cage. *faints*

Poor Yagyuu. *huggles*

[yuki_scorpio]

Thank you very much! :DDDD

[dshae47]

This should've gone on for another 30,000 words and we'd all have been grateful for it ;_;.

Great story. LOVED it. A STORY! *cries*

And the way you cast them made me extra happy, I cast them similarly in a Spanish fic I wrote last year but this one was much better done, so it felt like double fanservice to me, ahaha. :D <3 <3 <3.

In short: thank you! <3 <3 I'm so glad you finished writing it. Straight into memories, I'm sure I'll be rereading this one. <3.

[yuki_scorpio]

Great minds think alike? XD

Thank you very much! ♥;;;;;;;