Comments | worblehat: The Obtrusiveness Of Incisors [NC-17; Atobe/Sanada]

worblehat

The Obtrusiveness Of Incisors [NC-17; Atobe/Sanada]

Aug 29, 2006 07:33

Title: The Obtrusiveness Of Incisors
Author: worblehat
Genre: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Atobe/Sanada
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Konomi's, not mine.
Notes: Done for the AWDT. The prompt was "breaking the habit." Beta'd by regulusa.
Summary: Sanada wants Atobe to quit doing that.
Word Count: 1,498

( The Obtrusiveness Of Incisors )

medium, pot, adult

Comments 32

flosspyromaniac August 29 2006, 14:48:58 UTC

Well... where to start?
I love your characterisations of them both. So much. They flow and fight around each other and somehow fit perfectly. There is a reason thse two are called 'Tango Pair' and you have reminded me. They dance, hot and passionate and different and you have this here. And the smut was very, very nice ^.^
If you don't mind, I'd like to add this to the Atobe/Sanada list on tenipuri_recs.
♥
~Floss

worblehat August 29 2006, 16:55:44 UTC

I'm so glad you liked the characterisation! It didn't seem to be the most in-character thing I've written with these two but I still somehow liked it. I didn't even notice the dancing back-and-forth thing so I'm glad you pointed it out! Glad you liked the smut as well.

Sure, feel free to rec. Thanks! ♥

hibimaosuki August 29 2006, 15:13:58 UTC

Mmmmm...... This is only the second Tango Pair I've read, and it makes me wonder why I don't go looking for them...

worblehat August 29 2006, 16:56:14 UTC

I've only written them twice myself. They have a dynamic that is difficult for me to write, though they are one of my more favourite pairings. Glad you liked this one! :)

kidouche August 29 2006, 15:18:08 UTC

Oh my. *fans self* That was delightful, in a very naughty way. 8D I have a soft spot for this pairing, and you've certainly done the boys justice. (Atobe biting Sanada is so...Atobe. XD YUM.)

worblehat August 29 2006, 16:57:07 UTC

I have such a soft spot for this pairing, I cannot even begin to explain it. I'm so glad you thought this read okay and yes, Atobe would totally bite Sanada, no question (in my mind, anyhow). Thanks! ♥

xxmaddy August 29 2006, 18:23:36 UTC

Wheee~! I love this pairing.. >.> Biting... XDD <3

worblehat August 29 2006, 18:45:50 UTC

I love it too! Mmmbiting. Thanks for reading. :)

fluttering August 29 2006, 18:36:41 UTC

You write a great submissive-ish Sanada. :D

Liked this one. Atobe biting his lover is one heck of a hot mental image XD

worblehat August 29 2006, 18:47:07 UTC

Haha, do I? I've really gotta write him dominant one of these days. I just feel like it's kind of predictable, and that, for whatever reason, is more difficult for me.

...well, now that you put it that way, yes, it does make for quite a mental image. Of the hot variety.

Very much so, actually.

Thank you for reading! And for the possessive mental image. ♥