Fic: HP: Dandelions and Dreams (H/D Rated:R)

Mar 13, 2007 18:52

I keep forgetting to post this here. Originally written for acromantular for hpvalensmut.

Title: Dandelions and Dreams
Author: wook77
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: R
Word Count: ~7500
Warnings: none
Summary: Harry/Draco. Harry's not sure if he's dreaming but if this is a dream, he doesn't want to wake.
A/N: For acromantular at hpvalensmut. Many thanks to yodels for the beta. All remaining mistakes are my ( Read more... )

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original_lie March 14 2007, 13:57:51 UTC
mmm. you are so brilliant. i remember now why i missed your stories so much, it's your way with words. your bloody brilliance.

wonderful, so wonderful.

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wook77 March 16 2007, 02:01:20 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed!

Miss my stories?

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original_lie March 16 2007, 04:10:40 UTC
Miss my stories?

Yeah :( I don't get to read as much fanfic as I used to because of stupid work and RL shit, so I end up missing a lot of fic and stuff, then when I finally have a day off I forget about it and never get around to reading it.

Thankfully I spent all yesterday in bed reading my flist everytime someone updated (yay for firefox extentions) and this popped up. I needed me some awesome fic.

:) So that's where that came from.

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wook77 March 17 2007, 02:09:41 UTC
Ahhh! I thought it might be the various and sundry fandoms or smoething, instead *grins*.

Your job needs a kick in the teeth!

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drusillas_rain March 14 2007, 16:10:05 UTC
whoah

you drew me in with the beginning - the twirling, dream-like quality. You had me completely hooked with the second scene in the hospital and the stashed orthopedic shoes.

I loved how you kept things a mystery, teasing us with information about what's going on at the end of the day in the closet. Was this Malfoy, inserting himself in Harry's coma? Was it a DE wanting to harm Harry?

For some reason, Draco was no longer in the black robes of Harry's dream. Instead, he was in ill-fitting Healer's garb, the white uniform sliding off his shoulders while the small hat covered one of his eyes.
eeeeeee!

I also loved reliving Harry's youth with him.
There was something freeing about running about the Lake like a couple of ill-behaved children.
This theme was wonderfully carried out through the story.

This was brilliantly written, and I can't believe I missed it before now.

*memories*

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wook77 March 16 2007, 02:06:15 UTC
Awesome! I'm so glad that you liked this! I really wanted people to think that it HAD to be draco but question the assumption.

The first sequence is my favourite - it came about when I was walking around outside and there were all these almost dandelion clocks floating around in the air. They were actually from a cactus but it looked like it was snowing... just so beautiful!

Thanks so much!!!! *loves*

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ellie_nor March 14 2007, 23:43:02 UTC
Ooh, wonderful! I wasn't entirely sure which side Draco was on until the bit where he made Harry remember the battle. Excellent work! The only thing I could want to see changed is that I would have liked you to draw it out a little more, right at the end (because we needs more wook!H/D :-D ).

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wook77 March 16 2007, 02:08:04 UTC
Thanks!

I'm glad that you liked it!

I'm not sure where you see it needing drawn out at the end, though. Did you mean more sex?

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confiteor_3 March 16 2007, 01:29:05 UTC
Omg. I love this. It's dreamy and flowing and I rather figured out what was going on but I still wasn't sure, and it's perfect. I loved the interactions between the characters. Just the whole thing. ♥

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wook77 March 16 2007, 02:09:00 UTC
Thanks so much! I wanted people to guess but not be quite sure about the conclusion so I'm glad that came through!

I'm glad you enjoyed!!!

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bonfoi March 16 2007, 03:09:40 UTC
That was a lovely way to end my evening. Very lyrical; you captured the dreamy fog so well.

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wook77 March 17 2007, 02:10:52 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this! I'm excited to know I did what I set out to do!

Thanks for letting me know!!!

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