Comments | woodsgal: Feels Like A Cliche (Merlin fanfic) PART 2

woodsgal

Feels Like A Cliche (Merlin fanfic) PART 2

Feb 28, 2010 23:39

( Part 2 )

fandom: merlin, ship: merthur, fic, fic: feels like a cliche

Comments 32

venivincere March 1 2010, 00:58:00 UTC

Mmmmm! Lovely slow build-up! I love the office!motif and their banter back and forth; that's really spot on. Very nice story! :-)

woodsgal March 1 2010, 08:18:47 UTC

Ha ha, the build up would have been slower if i included the scene with Freya's kid. She origanally had a little boy with Leon IDEK. The office stuff i was all gah with as i have no idea what even happens in an office XP. The banter is just part of their relationship so it had to be included. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting =D.

lilydancer March 1 2010, 01:15:48 UTC

Oblivious!Merlin *pats Merlin's head*

I should have been in bed like an hour and a half ago but couldn't resist. I love the slow-build up of this, and the way neither of them was really prepared to admit their feelings at first felt very in-character, especially Arthur. Nice story :)

woodsgal March 1 2010, 08:39:48 UTC

Yes Oblivious!Merlin and DaddyIssues!Arthur XD. You were reading my fic when you should have been in bed? I feel loved =3. I'm glad you liked the build up and yeah, I mean neither boy is going to openly admit their feelings that's not how they work. Still i'm relieved that they're not OOC. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting.

ctkelly March 1 2010, 03:56:32 UTC

Cliches will forever be awesome. =) Poor Arthur, always after his father's approval. Even his damn love life. Glad he finally toughened up. And oblivious Merlin, what else is new! Thanks for sharing.

woodsgal March 1 2010, 08:53:02 UTC

Cliches are things i need to learn to stop writing ha ha XP. Yes, silly Arthur always after his Daddy's approval *snorts*. Yes, oblivious Merlin just how we love him. No, thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

archaeologist_d March 1 2010, 15:21:52 UTC

That was sweet. I loved the banter between them. Good job with this.

woodsgal March 1 2010, 15:30:54 UTC

Ha ha people seem to like the banter, obviously i did something right there. I'm glad you thought it was sweet. Thanks for reading and commenting =D.

a8c_sock March 1 2010, 19:00:04 UTC

Oh Merlin, so oblivious.

This was a fun AU. Nice buildup.

woodsgal March 1 2010, 19:02:04 UTC

Ha ha isn't he always? Merlin may not be an idiot but he naive.

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting.