Victims of Love (Merlin Fanfic)

[woodsgal]

Title: Victims Of Love
Rating: M
Warnings/Spoilers: None.
Summary: Love and lust are uncontrollable emotions that can stand the test of time. The only problem is that Merlin and Arthur don't remember each other. Arthur and Gwen are dating but when things happen that cause Arthur and Merlin to be drawn together things start to crumble and Merlin

Comments

[book_worm_vicky]

I adore reincarnation fics, and this in particular was wonderful! I loved the inevitablility of it all, and the visions when they touched were brilliant, a great thought!

I loved how Merlin was checking out Arthur, and the bit of banter from the past was great too. Jeez, that scene after Merlin tries to hit Arthur... I can see it in my mind's eye, and... well... *clears throat* Yeah. Wow.

I loved that they didn't want to hurt Gwen, that they tried to avoid it, but that she sort of had it figured out anyway, poor girl! Still, Lancelot will come for her soon, I hope.

The ending was amazing, leaving it open like that, I like to believe they did have their happy ending. I love the way you've left it so we can see it carrying on, can see them out there living their lives, not finished, still in the midst of it all. Incredible.

[woodsgal]

It was really wonderful? I mean it was very different to anything i've written for this fandom before so i'm very nervous. XD Well wouldn't you be checking him out with my chick-lit descriptons and ha ha i'm glad you like that scene, it was my attempt at sorta smut after all. Yeah poor Gwen will find her Lancelot soon. As for the open ending, well it was a rush thing because i wanted to get this up before i went to bed and because i want people to imagine their own endings. Thank you very much for a lovely first comment and what did you think of my lyric choices?

[book_worm_vicky]

Sorry for late reply!! Have been on holiday and then being sick. Fun.

It was wonderful *nods*

I so would be *drools* ;)

Good to know, I do love Gwen/Lance. And I love Gwen, so long as I don't think about her love life in relation to Arthur and hurting him.

LOL! It may have partly been a rush thing but it worked extremely well!

It is quite alright ;) Brilliant lyrics, I love that Muse song!!

[woodsgal]

Well I hope you had fun on holiday and I hope you're better now.

Ha ha, I would be too. In fact I asked my mum if I could have a chocolate covered Bradley James for my birthday because that would be even hotter but she said no. That was Adeina's fault I asked for that by the way, she said it and I have a habit of parroting her now XP.

Ha ha, it was very rushed.

The lyrics are good and the Muse song is good. Did you listen to any of the songs you didn't know? I always do when I find lyrics in fics.

P.S I am currently writing an office AU and it's turning out a lot longer then this. I hope you'll read that too.

[book_worm_vicky]

I did and I am, thank you!

Your birthday? Have a belated or early happy birthday virtual glomp! *glomps you* I enjoy glomping people :D If I am early then when is your birthday so I can do... something. IDK what ;)

Mmmm... chocolate covered Bradley James... mmm. *drools* ;) She said no? That's so surprising!! ;) LOL!!

I did, ad they ruled. Brilliant choice, especially for the boys. Very appropriate. I always do the same, in fact that's how I got into quite a few of the artists I like now ;)

I will. Sounds interesting, and I always try to read everything from people I actually talk to, especially ones who write as well as you do! I really do love your style, it has a feel that I just adore.

[woodsgal]

Ha ha a very early happy birthday, my 18th isn't until November. I was just asking anyway, I'm slightly insane you see.

Ha ha they were all good songs, I luff my music and ha ha same. That fanmixes and fanvids.

XD thank you for saying I write well, there are plenty of people who write a lot better then me. I'm glad you like my style though.

[book_worm_vicky]

Your 18th, that's pretty significant. Awesome. LOL!! Fair enough, I always wrote birthday lists the day after my birthday otherwise I never had anything to ask for next year!

I generally try to stay away from music or I end up listening to it 24/7, and would be deaf in two years from my mum shouting at me about my earphones being in for over half an hour at a time *eye roll* Sometimes it sucks having a doctor for a mum ;)

It's no problem :D And maybe some people do write technically better, if you can judge that, but I really love your style, so :P to them ;)