FIC: TVD; Consumption

May 01, 2013 21:31



Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Title: Consumption
Rating: high T; angst, death, nothing graphic though
Spoilers: General for S4
Disclaimer: I don't own TVD
Word Count: 1469
Summary: For aquakitty1864 for the Elena Gilbert fanwork exchange at ialwayssurvive. Prompt: Elena, We all have an internal struggle against something, sometimes it wins. It's not fluff, let's just say, but I hope ( Read more... )

fanfic, the vampire diaries, elena gilbert

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scorpiod1 May 3 2013, 01:46:14 UTC
Wow that was actually gutting. Especially the ending with Jeremy:

what do you have left-
-if you lose everyone what do you have left-
She has herself, what a cruel joke

and then the "don't say his name" part JESUS

like all of the sections are great. I really love how you go through all the characters, even the minor ones, and how they're all resonate and painful in their own ways, like, how comforting Damon makes her feel useful, or feeling bad for Aimee and Sarah's parents. You're great at making all the sections distinct and unique, because they could have easily all blended into each other but they all stand out.

and this part: She doesn’t let herself go there, though, really go into Andie’s head, because if she does, she might break, and she can’t let herself feel every death- at this point that’s suicide. She feels bad for thinking this way, and sheds tears.

actual perfect omg. IT'S SELFISH TO TRY TO PROTECT HERSELF FROM FEELING EVERY DEATH /o\

She rather thinks she’s found herself, if only because losing seems to define her.

This is a great and terrible and tragic summation of Elena, I love it.

BUT MY HEART @ the end, Jereeeemy ;_____;

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woobloo May 3 2013, 04:58:08 UTC
Thank you so much.

ELENAAA though...... *cries*

And Jeremyyyyyy.

actual perfect omg. IT'S SELFISH TO TRY TO PROTECT HERSELF FROM FEELING EVERY DEATH /o\

It just breaks my heart, because she can't ~not empathize, it's what she does, and yet can't you imagine what it was like, feeling like she had to feel everybody's pain and.....aslkdp;fhqelpfjkq.

ELENA OKAY. She does things to people.

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