Guys, I need your help!
I want to enter a writing contest, and I have a story in mind that I want to enter...But I'm not sure if it's good enough/appropriate for a writing contest. So I was wondering if you guys could read it and let me know what you think. It's not long, but I think Livejournal formatted it funny, so I'm sorry if it's a bit hard to read.
It's
here And any editing you want to do, feel free, I need all the help I can get.
Thanks guys! You rock!!! ^_^