Jul 08, 2007 18:34
I wrote a fanfic about Dream Pair. (Fuji and Kikumaru) Of course I'm not done but I need to know if it is good. Of course the tittle is dumn but I didn't know what to call it.
Tittle: Eiji and Fuji's Friendship
One day Eiji did not go to school.So after school Fuji went over to Eiji's house.Eiji's mom answerd the door."Hello. I'm here to see Eiji." "Oh yes he is up stairs in his room." "Thank you." said Fuji
So Fuji went up stairs and knocked on Kikumaru's door. "Eiji are you in there?"
"Oh yes come in.Oh... it's you Fuji."
"Well yah who did you think it would be?"
"I thought you were uh...um...never mind."
Fuji could tell something was wrong so he sat down by him and put his arm around his best friend.
"What's wrong Eiji-kun?" Eiji's eyes were red and there were Kleenex boxes every where.
"Fuji, Oishi and I broke up"
"Oh no what happend?"
"Oishi was cheating on me w/ Ryoma."
Fuji's eyes opend. "That cheater. Don't cri Kikumaru-san I got your back."
"Thanks Fujiko." Then He hugged Fuji and did not let go for along time.
Hope you enjoyed it. I'm not done w/ it but please comment on this to see if it is good so far.(^__^)
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