Chapter 9
Chapter 9 is done and I need a beta. One good in smut too, please, because that's coming up soon. I'm looking into two versions of the same chapter for two audiences a few chapters later (PG-13 and NC-17). I am also looking for a beta who can help me in improving/checking for these aspects in my work:
-spelling/grammar (naturally)
-inconsistencies (these give me headaches as I often change my plots after I post my chapters...and posting my chapters later it seems I cannot)
-pace (completely and utterly crucial point, as I either ramble too long at some points or leap scenes like a rampant goat)
I would also appreciate someone who didn't attempt to wholly change my work (I know this seems kind of obvious but one of my friends really DID try to do this and we were in a row for weeks afterwards).
If those who are interested could reply to this post with your email address, livejournal, a promise that your age is (please, please don't lie to me) 18+ (17 being mildly risky in some countries and schools and me being a law dunce) and something that I could call you (anything without a long stream of numbers is dandy with me) then I would be ever-grateful.
--Aphena.
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