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Breaking Trust

Jun 20, 2008 01:59

Title:Breaking Trust
Author:ihrtkjr
Category:e/r, h/c, AU, and m-preg just because I don't really ever see them and I want to.
SpoilersNone right now, may change in the future.
RatingR to NC-17. Just want to be sure.
Pairingeventual Ryan/Eric, in the past Ryan/Speed, and Ryan/OMC
SummaryMy universe, Speed lives in this,but he hurts Ryan (not like that ( Read more... )

fic: breaking trust, author: ihrtkjr, rating: nc-17

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ihrtkjr June 20 2008, 14:12:16 UTC

Glad you liked. I haven't perfected how to skip ahead a few months without putting something like Two Months Later, so I will explain. In between the staircase and the flashback it has been about two and a half months. Lee and Jake are together and staying at Ryan's house with them. Jay is staying with a friend, and they are forcing Ryan out, because Jesse is coming to get his stuff. That is how Ryan and Eric are drunk together. I was tired and not feeling that well last night, and I just really wanted to get to the ending. So because of that I may go back and put in some things to explain some things. Or i'll explain it all better in the next chapter. Not sure. And to give you a hint, the stalker outside the window isn't Jesse. The next chapter will be up later today or tomorrow. Have a good one:)

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ihrtkjr June 20 2008, 20:18:48 UTC

No, it's none of them. But this person is part of the reason why Eric was drinking. I don't think I could do that to Ryan, make Tim want to kill them. And it wasn't Eric Tim was cheating with, so I just can't see the reason behind it. But, you never know.

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hobbits_friend June 21 2008, 15:18:26 UTC

so exciting! more, more, more!!!!! please?
loved ryan's last line :D

ihrtkjr June 22 2008, 11:13:17 UTC

I'm glad you loved it. The next part should be up later today. I decided to make the person who was watching/stalking a woman and told my beta this, but she didn't change the he's to she's. So that part was edited. I am working on the next part now. I'll just have to wait for my beta to read it and it will be put up.

P.S. We both love your icon:)

alligator138 June 21 2008, 15:48:08 UTC

OMG! THis is wow! I know that there's a chunk missing, and I'm sure you'll sort that out, but it's so exciting that there's someone watching and getting angry, and apparently it's not Jesse. @_@

I think we need to know what happened with Ryan and Jesse for Jesse to leave, and I'm sure it'll have repercussions for Jay. *wants more*

ihrtkjr June 22 2008, 11:22:23 UTC

You shall get more later today. I'm happy you liked. Thanks for reading and commenting. You'll find out why Jesse left almost immediately in the next chapter, and your eyes may get bigger.

I decided to make the person who was watching/stalking a woman and told my beta this, but she didn't change the he's to she's. So that part was edited. I am working on the next part now. I'll just have to wait for my beta to read it and it will be put up.