Comments | wobaozhewo: 009. Coffee, Eunhyuk/Donghae

wobaozhewo

009. Coffee, Eunhyuk/Donghae

Sep 22, 2010 15:49

[009] Coffee (11/100)
Eunhyuk/Donghae, Romance/stripper!au, NC-17 (pwp explicit sex), 1838 words, Archive

A/N: ... For catskilt and enabled by rodiy. I'm sorry for the... lack of skill.

( Eunhyuk looks away, his face turning red. For someone of his profession, he gets shy so easily; Donghae can't help laughing. )

100 suju challenge, pairing: eunhyuk/donghae, requested

Comments 28

catskilt September 23 2010, 02:59:55 UTC

POUNCES ON THIS LIKE A POUNCING THING

catskilt September 24 2010, 08:47:12 UTC

SO. I am here now to tell you how much I adore this.

The description of Eunhyuk doing his solo dance is just mindblowingly hot and my mind was accordingly blown because It's pride that turns up the corners of Donghae's lips because anyone can see the definition of Eunhyuk's stomach, and the trail peeking out, heading south to an apparent bulge at the crotch. Because there is intention in every swing, every motion. SCREAMING THIS IS SO FUCKING PERFECT KEI. I can picture this entire thing and I can tell you that it is looking pretty damn gorgeous ugh. And the whole thing about Donghae watching him and thinking of how he's the one who gets to do what everyone wants to do to Eunhyuk is like ah;alsdj nurghhh just. so. absolutely. sexy.

The harsh filter of colors from the screen makes Eunhyuk's eyeliner prominently perceived. Sharp. And every angle, every jut of bone is visible as a shadow plays along the edges of his face. I love how you describe him because seriously, your words are as beautiful as he is. I can give no higher praise ( ... )

wobaozhewo September 24 2010, 17:16:46 UTC

"one of the best smut writers I've come across" seems a bit drastically overstated lol but I'll take it :DDD

I love how you describe him because seriously, your words are as beautiful as he is. I can give no higher praise. :D
.................... omg, /o\ comparing my words to beauty incarnate /o\ omg

Also, that was a reason why I felt the need to Check With You on the "how do you feel about who top/bottoms," cause you know, some people have specific wants that need to be catered to and I didn't want to be all like "They's all whimsical wit it." when you actually wanted it like "Hyuk tops. All. The. Time." or vice versa. lmao ( ... )

catskilt September 24 2010, 17:21:34 UTC

WAIT WHAT. NO. IF YOU HAVE THE BACKSTORY, THEN YOU SHOULD WRITE IT. :D

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deeba84 September 24 2010, 00:23:39 UTC

This was amazing and not lame at all! I kinda feel sorry for Donghae at the end, but the smut was HOT!

wobaozhewo September 24 2010, 17:21:51 UTC

There's little reason to be sad for Donghae because he's going for what he wants and seems to be slowly succeeding... so far :)

Thanks for the comment :D

baby_buggs September 24 2010, 00:38:28 UTC

how can i not love this!?!?! ^^ hotness

wobaozhewo September 24 2010, 17:23:02 UTC

Aww^^ Thank you~

peaches_n_kream September 24 2010, 02:35:43 UTC

Agree, but don't. Give in, but never all the way.

//wibbles at you

what is this 'lame' of which you speak >:| this is awesome and totally bittersweet because of the way hyuk's holding back but hae's clinging onto small victories ;^;

wobaozhewo September 24 2010, 17:26:24 UTC

I meant, I am lame... for doing that? lmao, I'm not sure 8^D Nuuuuuuu, not the wibbles ;.; They have a hopeful ending here!

Haha, thank you♥

eiarim September 24 2010, 05:49:03 UTC

omg this is beautiful;except the tiny part of their relationship which I think full with uncertainties in hyukjae part as Donghae keep on challenging his luck;But overall this is awesome:D

wobaozhewo September 24 2010, 17:27:41 UTC

Ah, thank you ^^ It's hard to find that balance in a relationship, but they'll find theirs♥

Thank you :)