뻔뻔한 내 손끝 (My Shameless Fingertips)

May 22, 2010 17:39

뻔뻔한 내 손끝 (My Shameless Fingertips)
Tablo/Eunhyuk, Romance (PWP), NC-17 (explicit sex), 2081 words, Archive

A/N: Inspired by Bad Girl (Boom Boom) comeback performances, the sudden influx of Hyuk's half-naked body, and Victory Korea, of all things, but any of these inspirations may have little or nothing to do with what actually happens in the fic. ( Read more... )

pairing: tablo/eunhyuk

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todefinebeauty May 23 2010, 02:12:03 UTC
a;afljwe;oifjrgadfagWOEGIJDLKFDJKLF

THIS IS THE SOUND OF MY BRAIN SHORT CIRCUITING

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being coherent-sounding :) todefinebeauty May 23 2010, 02:51:15 UTC
Okay. ILU ♥ have I told you lately? ;~; BLOHYUK PORN YES. I think you got most of my incoherency online, so in summary: Boom Boom choreo! Struggling on the bed! "You look like you liked it" - *dead*! "Wrong answer"! Voyeurish!Blo! 8Q____________________

Okay now beyond the porn: Tablo's recurring possessiveness in this, his slight jealousy, that reaffirmation of For me and "that's mine" (while shaking...!) and "you're mine" (넌... 내꺼야 indeed) is so, so great. 8D

This body that Eunhyuk had worked hard to achieve, that's still all only for Tablo to enjoy. - This! Is perfect! That acknowledgement of Eunhyuk's hard work, and still that possessiveness in the wake of Eunhyuk doing as he says. The contrast of their bodies - hard muscle against his soft stomach, and how Tablo reassures himself of their mutual desire for each other - I really liked that, because for once it's Tablo who has that tiny seed of doubt/insecurity about himself with Eunhyuk, though it only goes so far as needing self-reassurance. Lol, does that make sense? I LIKED ( ... )

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Re: being coherent-sounding :) wobaozhewo May 23 2010, 06:04:17 UTC


I love how you were coherent enough to catch all the bits that I consciously tried to portray. The push and pull of control and trying to satisfy each other and themselves and proving to each other that want. ;~;

Hyuk being manry! TT I'm pretty sure this catered to my need for Hyuk to be toeing the lines of his innocence and shy nature, while still being that guy that wants to be wanted, and wants to possess ._.

I'm so glad that I could make your day better! 8) And less snotty and gross 8| If only I had the magical power to make colds go away :/ ♥ -sprinkles fairy dust-

You can defn do it! ♥

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Re: being coherent-sounding :) todefinebeauty May 23 2010, 19:41:23 UTC
:)

toeing the lines of his innocence and shy nature, while still being that guy that wants to be wanted, and wants to possess

This describes him perfectly, I think ♥ even outside of Blohyuk/fic. ♥

Urgh my cold is still lingering :| ... rereads :)

Last night was somewhat conducive to getting it going, haha. 1.6k and there's finally naked bodays~

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wobaozhewo May 23 2010, 06:05:23 UTC
|D

Blohyuk don't even have to try. Hurhur.

Thanks for reading~

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rodiy May 23 2010, 03:57:16 UTC
"Tablo pauses, right before getting up from his warm spot on the bed and taking a hand to palm the front of Eunhyuk's pants. "What's this?" This is like, the normalcy before the p0rnage starts.

I seriously look forward to the day when this makes it in the pages of pornaloudinc. xDDDD

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wobaozhewo May 23 2010, 06:06:23 UTC
lol. oh you. I want to see a day where you read pr0nz all the way through. :|

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rodiy June 30 2010, 18:55:24 UTC
Fufufufu, backtracking on comments and I didn't have to wait too long to get to hear it. :DDDD

Also, whenever I see the first line, it always makes me crack up. xDb

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wobaozhewo July 1 2010, 00:47:25 UTC
harhar, you :(

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catskilt May 23 2010, 03:58:35 UTC
Fucking fuck. That was hot. I'm not even a BloHyuk shipper (and really, clicked this out of desperation for some Hyukjae fic) but holy mother of Hyukjae's abs that was probably the hottest smut I've ever read in fandom. Your language and descriptions blow my mind, and ngl I have such a kink for Hyukjae working his dancing abilities into bedroom activities. Through all the sexy of this fic the feeling (possessiveness!) resonates too, and I can't think of words good enough to express how amazing that is.

I'm just sitting here wide-eyed thinking maybe I should get into this ship after all XD

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wobaozhewo May 23 2010, 06:23:39 UTC
Wow, I... haha, hottest smut in fandom *-* It's because of Hyuk and the Sex he exudes, really. And who wouldn't want to possess that? 8333 Their play for control and Hyuk's amazing hips are my kinks~ hurhur. His hips inspire every word here. haha (Love Bonamana hip thrusts. He works that move like no one's business *Q* lol, was another inspiration for this fic)

Thank you, thank you for reading and commenting ;; And I'm so glad you enjoyed this even though this isn't your ship .___.;;; ♥ They are a fun ship though. If you ever feel so inclined, I highly recommend it :Dbbb

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catskilt May 23 2010, 09:28:03 UTC
It really was a;ldkj perhaps because it had so many of my kinks in it and Hyuk is just sex personified right now *___* I agree, the hip thrusts are hypnotic and he really, really knows how to work 'em baby. All that dancing and hip work and stamina has made him potentially amazing in bed XD

LMAO. ngl I looked at your fic archive and I foresee a day when I'll be sitting down and reading through it all. fml, I did not intend to get into BloHyuk and now here I am ;___;

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wobaozhewo May 23 2010, 09:58:57 UTC
!!!

Hyuksex 8333 Pretty much the trigger of it all. Drips sex. All over. Obviously, boy can work it. Just needs... practice 8)

lol... ah, the archive. My earlier works... you can tell I was just starting. HAHA. But hopefully, if you do read them, you'll notice a marked improvement? But Blohyuk Blohyuk Blohyuk~ is exciting forays :) Haha, it's okay. I started out not intending either. Well. Here I am. lol. 8) Nothing to worry about ♥

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wobaozhewo May 23 2010, 06:24:35 UTC
B) ♥

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