When I Fall - Chapter 6/6

[wobaozhewo]

When I Fall (6/6) - Tablo/Eunhyuk (Daniel/Hyukjae)
Romance/Comedy (coffeehouse!au), PG13
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Summary: After three years of college, Hyukjae decided to take a year off to "find himself." It wasn't long before he started questioning what it was he really wanted to find.

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[todefinebeauty]

l-o-v-e you, i was made to be with you ♥!!!! I love the way Tablo says that in the song and it makes it imaginable here :D Lol, Beautiful words would totally turn Daniel on. I like how after Hyuk says his little couplet (I like how you returned to the napkin, btw! Nicee), he reacts in that way, because I think it's true to his character. Actually, that whole scene with them talking on the overpass - it could be cheesy but it seems so them, and their words, and it just makes sense.

For all their intelligent conversations, all their poetics, it was all right that they were reduced to the awkward sputterings of dumb fools in--

Something like love.
This made my heart hum :D

I like your resolution(ish) of Hyuk's worries about the future and where he's headed and everything - all the worries he had were so realistic, and I'm glad it was resolved in the same manner. Sometimes the opportunity is right there, and we consider it, sort of, and someday we look at it again and think, well, why not?

I loved this :) I enjoyed reading it so much, and I'm so glad you wrote it - it's cemented my love for them all over again (AND FOR YOUR WRITING)! And EPILOGUE. Um rap battle???? :O!

P.S. "Wanted me to see if you were interested in being his student. Letting him mold you more like," he laughed. - BOOM ACADEMY! Haha 8]

[wobaozhewo]

lol... I suppose no one should know where Hyuk's lines come from, but it's good that Daniel's final line is recognizable 8DDD It took me forever to round it back to the napkin. lol.

I've been really antsy over the first and last scenes, whether they were appropriate enough or just... good enough for them. For them to open up enough to finally be comfortable with each other, and then just having it all flipped over to have to start over in a different context, I really wanted them to be... real. lol. _-_

Boom wants to make him ssanti~~~

Rap battle. A challenge for another time perhaps~ I won't give up on it. Haha, my writing doesn't really doesn't compare to yours, but thank you ;_; Thank you for reading this and liking it and... yeah. ;_; ♥♥♥ Hoping I don't disappoint.