I honestly hope you are not being serious... on word! hahahaha... so are you actually going to make a website? I transferred money to pay off my overdraft this week so that I can pay for hosting now! Back to the constructive criticism... seen as your asking for it!
[criticism begins...] er... I don't know, not much to say really, cos thats your style and it looks okay in that style! Only thing that looked strange on first glance was the feet, probably because the lines aren't as heavy as the rest of the image! I could say things like add colour or something, but I like it as it is... If Gary saw it he may say, Paul doesn't like manga, but its not really that manga style, and I imaging your dad saying its babyish - cos he always says that, but I can't think of anything to say... other than the feet! *thumbs up* [...end criticism]
Thanks hayley that was useful, Made me feel great! lol... Why dont you just go for a free-hosting site like CJB.net? People are telling me its good... but then... they might be lying? ¬_¬
Im scared the tutors will hate the style, im just finishing the first baddy idea now... hang on and ill post it!....
I WASNT BEING SARCASTIC LOL, your critism is good!
I think when I actually animate this, ill make it kinda scruffy-shaky line animation? Toon boom is a good option, but I mean, can i buy it? is it expensive?
I thought you sounded a tad sarcastic earlier, my mistake...
I like the icons on the tshirts, just make sure that when you act them out, they both act completely different to each other, because they're such a similar style, from certain perspectives they may look the same, so you will have to rely on stance/pose and gestures to distinguish between the good and the bad... thats my only advice - act them well, just not the cliched well!
Ill show you my primary character idea...
Thats the hero... He goes around helping fish, the villain kills them for his Fish and chip cafe on a beach in Hawaii!
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And yep, decent linkage indeed!
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[criticism begins...] er... I don't know, not much to say really, cos thats your style and it looks okay in that style! Only thing that looked strange on first glance was the feet, probably because the lines aren't as heavy as the rest of the image! I could say things like add colour or something, but I like it as it is... If Gary saw it he may say, Paul doesn't like manga, but its not really that manga style, and I imaging your dad saying its babyish - cos he always says that, but I can't think of anything to say... other than the feet! *thumbs up* [...end criticism]
All done!
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Im scared the tutors will hate the style, im just finishing the first baddy idea now... hang on and ill post it!....
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Free hosting is shite... low bandwidth limits, and low storage, shitty servers and pop up banners everywhere! I shall go for the paid option I think.
Waiting for the posting.... my legs feel like they are on fire!
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I think when I actually animate this, ill make it kinda scruffy-shaky line animation? Toon boom is a good option, but I mean, can i buy it? is it expensive?
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I thought you sounded a tad sarcastic earlier, my mistake...
I like the icons on the tshirts, just make sure that when you act them out, they both act completely different to each other, because they're such a similar style, from certain perspectives they may look the same, so you will have to rely on stance/pose and gestures to distinguish between the good and the bad... thats my only advice - act them well, just not the cliched well!
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Narf!!
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