A couple of fics
I've htmlized up my two most recent fics, primarily because Yaheck did odd things with my TS/KP XO, Dufus, when I posted it to SentinelAngst.
I am too tired to do a post-htmlizing read-through, so some errors might have crept in. Also, they weren't betad; so I'd really appreciate anyone who actually reads the stories pointing out issues (beyond the obvious - these are two pretty minor fics!)
I'm actually pretty happy with Dufus. Out of the Darkness is a lot weaker - I have lines like "Then, he had been a protector, not just a watcher. Blair had called him a Sentinel" and "But Simon was in prison, a hostage to his good behavior, and he - he could almost measure his decline, his loss of strength, the waning of his senses." When I see lines like this in fics, I go read something else. But this tone is what the story WANTED; and I have a general policy of posting everything. (And sometimes the stories that I consider the most problematic end up getting a bit of notice; for instance, First Aid was nominated for something-or-the-other the other day.)
- Helen
I am too tired to do a post-htmlizing read-through, so some errors might have crept in. Also, they weren't betad; so I'd really appreciate anyone who actually reads the stories pointing out issues (beyond the obvious - these are two pretty minor fics!)
I'm actually pretty happy with Dufus. Out of the Darkness is a lot weaker - I have lines like "Then, he had been a protector, not just a watcher. Blair had called him a Sentinel" and "But Simon was in prison, a hostage to his good behavior, and he - he could almost measure his decline, his loss of strength, the waning of his senses." When I see lines like this in fics, I go read something else. But this tone is what the story WANTED; and I have a general policy of posting everything. (And sometimes the stories that I consider the most problematic end up getting a bit of notice; for instance, First Aid was nominated for something-or-the-other the other day.)
- Helen