[FIC] Discoveries

[anesthesiagirl]

Title: Discoveries
Pairing: Ry/Col
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Don't own 'em, just borrowing 'em.
Summary: My secret santa fic for lorenafire.....I don't think its my best, but I don't write smut as well as some others!

Comments

[leatharegee]

Awwwwww! Sweet with a touch of angst! I love it!

[clayangel]

Mmm. Hot. ^_^ Smut is difficult to write, but you did a damn fine job... makes me considering finishing my smut fic....

I love the image of Colin watching Ryan like that. I don't know why, but I think that's the sexiest thing about this.

[krzcowzgomoo]

* makes me considering finishing my smut fic....*

you'd better finish anything! Anything you write is fantastic, so you better finish! lol
and i agree with you, Colin watching Ryan was definatly the sexiest part about this!

[apis_cerana]

That was so adorable, and hot, and...oh God. Guh. Amazing.

Keep up the good work, seriously. o_o

[knowyourlips]

*stares into space*

Guh, sorry. *blinks* Wow. Hey, I really liked that. It was GOOD. Hot.

I think my favourite line was "Tonight was no different. Ryan had found an excuse to kiss Colin during a game, his lips lingering for maybe a moment longer than necessary to get the laugh." I don't know if it's how you worded it, or just the subject matter, but I really liked it. Went back and reread it a few times, and I still really like it. *shrugs* Random comment of the day, I guess ;)

[emilyfairy]

Holy... wow... that was hot. I like the idea of Colin watching Ryan, and Ryan getting caught in the act but still staying lost in the fantasy. *fans herself*

Great job.

Emily :)