FIC: Dirty Little Secret (Part 6)

[knowyourlips]

Title: Dirty Little Secret (Part 6)

Rating: R

Pairing: Ryan/Colin

Summary:

Comments

[violent_rabbit]

Uh that last line broke me. Really, It's taken 5 tries to write this without typos.

Throughly enjoying this. :D

[foureyedsnail]

Heavens, Colin must have some kind of self-control. Says nothing, does nothing, just glances, pauses, soft regrets.

*laughs* Almost corresponds exactly to Ryan's seeming lack of it, does it not? Perhapsssssss.........

Yay, great job. ;)

[stilmoch]

Oooh, yeah yeah yeah (jumps on the bandwagon of this entire thought).

[foureyedsnail]

Party on the bandwagon! Whooo!

[stilmoch]

And we MUST invite Colin and Ryan, too!

[clayangel]

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Yummy. I think I'm less confused now.

Anyway, that was absolutely gorgeous. The image of Ryan undressing Colin, but not letting Colin do the same is so great. It's like a need to be in charge because he's maybe starting to feel things for Colin now and he needs to stay in control. Yay. More?

[clayangel]

Yeah, that's what I was aiming for; Ryan needing, so desperately, to be in control of this, because he thinks he can control his feelings somehow.

It was a bit like that in the other chapter, I think; I wanted Ryan to not ever want to kiss Colin on the mouth, for fear of it being too intimate/losing control/being more than just sex ... so really, nothing like what I just said, lol. Don't mind me.

*wanders off*

[knowyourlips]

Yeah, obviously, that was me. *sighs*

[anesthesiagirl]

thank god, ryan's walls are finally falling....you've kept me on the edge of my seat with this one!

[jessica_whoser]

Gah. *dies from the goodness*