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FIC: Dirty Little Secret (Part 5)

Nov 29, 2005 13:16

Title: Dirty Little Secret (Part 5)

Pairing: Ryan/Colin

Rating: R

Summary: ( He'd known Colin was in love with him, even when he'd danced with Greg in front of his best friend )

a: knowyourlips, p: colin/ryan, s: dirty little secret

Comments 6

jessica_whoser November 29 2005, 03:53:43 UTC

Ooh...interesting...

stilmoch November 29 2005, 05:02:20 UTC

Well, at least it's bothering him now. Still lovin' it.

foureyedsnail November 29 2005, 06:16:57 UTC

He'd known Colin was in love with him when his friend had silently drained his entire fucking glass.

This made me *cry*.

indybaggins November 29 2005, 08:38:27 UTC

Oh the ending made me get tears into my eyes... So goddamn beautiful and hearttearing.

clayangel November 29 2005, 18:09:41 UTC

I'm a little confused as to what, exactly is going on. Um... so this chapter takes place during a time where Ryan & Colin have been having sex for a while, right? Why doesn't Ryan let himself kiss Colin... I feel like I should go back and reread the last two chapters....

But aside from my confusion, I'm still very much enjoying this. ^_^ In fact, I shall skip off and read the next chapter and leave a better comment than this.