Well, that ending is... Humm, I'm going to have to ponder that - paradox indeed! I do love that Sarah asks for a last kiss... So bittersweet!
I also love the way you describe every step they take, from the moment they get into the building to the moment they come out again - provides a good picture of what is going on without being too detailed.
And I'm rambling hehe. As usual, I love your Time Loops!
If this is the end of your series it fits perfectly. No matter what Sarah and Cameron are doing they are trapped in a time loop. The last kiss was so sad.
Thanks olli1a. And nope, not the end of the series. I actually started a different Time Loop and had to stop half way through when I realized I should get this one out first. :)
Goooood one! Thanks! I think the end is perfect. No Paradox in my eyes. The future is happening, one way or another, and there will always be Cameron :-) Only Problem after this loop, Camerons Loops start again from Loop 1! Don't they?
Not sure I understand the paradox (I'm pretty happily time theory-stupid *g*), but I loved this all the same. You do real-time action like no one else, and the ending was haunting in a beautifully concealed way. Thanks for writing and sharing!
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I do love that Sarah asks for a last kiss... So bittersweet!
I also love the way you describe every step they take, from the moment they get into the building to the moment they come out again - provides a good picture of what is going on without being too detailed.
And I'm rambling hehe. As usual, I love your Time Loops!
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I love doing action scenes. :)
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Thanks thorstochter. Glad you enjoyed it and liked the end. :)
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