Amazing as usual. I loved the description of the explosion and the kiss the most. "Her calculations indicated she was months away from even getting to hug Sarah." Ah, poor Cameron - but still, the best line
“Sarah, please do not leave me,” - This made me tear up a little. Yes, I have abadonment issue, too. I'm really glad Sarah went back and rescued Cameron. If I were, too, in her shoes I'll be letting myself be captured so I can be rescued if not.. then so be it. But, I'm really glad Sarah did.. ^_^
I love it that you are taking us back again see the point when they are still starting.. Well, I love every updates. *sigh* I dont really have a point except.. I actually dont know.. hahaha. :D
When Sarah kissed Cameron I couldn't believe it XD I've never read anything like that before. Sarah initiating the kiss yes, but after weeks of sexual tension. This was completely out of the blue. Loved it! Cant wait for the next loop!
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Glad you liked it and yes she is! ;)
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I loved the description of the explosion and the kiss the most.
"Her calculations indicated she was months away from even getting to hug Sarah." Ah, poor Cameron - but still, the best line
Waiting patiently for more!
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Hehe..the kiss was the inspiration of this loop.
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I love it that you are taking us back again see the point when they are still starting.. Well, I love every updates. *sigh* I dont really have a point except.. I actually dont know.. hahaha. :D
Just keep on updating.
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Glad you are enjoying them and thanks for commenting. :)
I am giving peeks into the full spectrum of their time together.
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Glad you enjoyed it tac04 and thanks for commenting. :)
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To paraphrase some anonymous so-and-so, thank you for writing!
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Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for commenting. :)
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