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wkgreen March 6 2010, 20:21:41 UTC
Thanks minarobins, and I hadn't thought of that interpretation of Sarah running. :)

Glad you liked it and yes she is! ;)

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storm_8 March 6 2010, 16:20:51 UTC
Amazing as usual.
I loved the description of the explosion and the kiss the most.
"Her calculations indicated she was months away from even getting to hug Sarah." Ah, poor Cameron - but still, the best line

Waiting patiently for more!

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wkgreen March 6 2010, 20:22:57 UTC
Thanks storm!

Hehe..the kiss was the inspiration of this loop.

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rhadley1307 March 7 2010, 02:36:10 UTC
“Sarah, please do not leave me,” - This made me tear up a little. Yes, I have abadonment issue, too. I'm really glad Sarah went back and rescued Cameron. If I were, too, in her shoes I'll be letting myself be captured so I can be rescued if not.. then so be it. But, I'm really glad Sarah did.. ^_^

I love it that you are taking us back again see the point when they are still starting.. Well, I love every updates. *sigh* I dont really have a point except.. I actually dont know.. hahaha. :D

Just keep on updating.

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wkgreen March 7 2010, 06:10:32 UTC
I will do my best to keep updating, rhadley. :)

Glad you are enjoying them and thanks for commenting. :)

I am giving peeks into the full spectrum of their time together.

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tac04 March 7 2010, 03:07:57 UTC
When Sarah kissed Cameron I couldn't believe it XD I've never read anything like that before. Sarah initiating the kiss yes, but after weeks of sexual tension. This was completely out of the blue. Loved it! Cant wait for the next loop!

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wkgreen March 7 2010, 06:16:05 UTC
hehe... you can blame the adrenaline rush of surviving an explosion. :)

Glad you enjoyed it tac04 and thanks for commenting. :)

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resin_ga_miteru March 7 2010, 03:55:08 UTC
Awww, woobie Cameron! I knew Sarah couldn't just leave Cam behind, no matter how hard she thinks she should or ought to.

To paraphrase some anonymous so-and-so, thank you for writing!

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wkgreen March 7 2010, 06:18:45 UTC
Nope, no matter how hard she tries, Sarah and Cameron will always come together. :)

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for commenting. :)

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