Cameron/Sarah: Time Loop 37

Oct 20, 2009 22:36

Title: Time Loop 37 ( Read more... )

sarah connor chronicles, tscc

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skippr October 21 2009, 04:44:53 UTC
Yay, I got all excited when i opened up the S/C site and saw this. I love your stories so much, they are always so different and interesting. You do a great job! Can't wait for the next one!!

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wkgreen October 21 2009, 12:48:17 UTC
Thanks! My Time Loop idea allows me to experiment with lots of different story ideas.

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hirai October 21 2009, 05:37:10 UTC
Whoo :D This was my favorite loop so far, for sure.

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wkgreen October 21 2009, 12:48:42 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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wkgreen October 21 2009, 12:52:28 UTC
You are welcome. Thanks for reading and commenting. :) Bittersweetness seems to pervade their relationship, doesn't it.

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demoka October 21 2009, 08:34:26 UTC
*smiles*

*all teary from the ending* I... I really wish this were somehow a real episode! Kinda like "Life Serial" (I think it was this ep) on Buffy!

Yay for putting in the attack by Derek, showing everyone how non-threatening Cam is! (well, on Sarah's orders...)

and yes it was awesome for Sarah to fight for Cam, but I dunno... Kinda unrealistic cause they shouldn't be attacking Sarah, Mother of All Destiny and John Connor.

I kinda wish you had described who else was in the bunker with them. And on that note, I was a little confused, if there were other little bunkers, why weren't people sent there too? Am I making sense?

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wkgreen October 21 2009, 13:01:20 UTC
*all teary from the ending* I... I really wish this were somehow a real episode! Kinda like "Life Serial"

Thanks demoka, that is high praise.

yes it was awesome for Sarah to fight for Cam, but I dunno... Kinda unrealistic cause they shouldn't be attacking Sarah, Mother of All Destiny and John Connor.

Heh, what makes you think they threw the first punch. ;) Sarah is under alot of stress. ;)

I kinda wish you had described who else was in the bunker with them. Hmmmm.... wish I had to, now that I think about it. (facepalm)

I was a little confused, if there were other little bunkers, why weren't people sent there too? Am I making sense?

Yes you are making sense, I could have been clearer on that. My idea was that the secondary bunkers were for storage only. And were not fit for long term human habitation. Places to store stuff you would need after you come out of the bunkers.

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storm_8 October 21 2009, 08:43:11 UTC
This was incredible. I have to agree with some other people that this is one of the best time loops so far.
I loved the last scene! Very well written!
Can't wait for more!!

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wkgreen October 21 2009, 13:02:31 UTC
Thank you very much! :) Comments like that only encourage me. ;)

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