dragon age 2 :: fem!hawke/anders, fem!hawke/merrill :: if it gets too late

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Comments

[featheredraven]

Oh, poor everyone. I really like this; well written, and I like how you're characterizing Anders. Also, Justice almost showing up was a good touch, especially for when this is taking place.

:)

[withpractice_ff]

Thanks so much! Anders is a... complicated fella.

[withpractice_ff]

Thank you!

Ahahaha, I always agonize over titles. I'm glad this one seemed to fit!

[lehni]

Ooh, nice.

And I find myself surprisingly on Justice's side, for once. Oh, Anders...

[withpractice_ff]

Thanks much!

Oh Anders, indeed. That boy is trouble.

[la_libertine]

Very nice indeed, a lovely mix of feelings and need and want all wrapped up in inappropriateness.

Poor Anders. Poor Hawke. Poor Merrill. *sighs*

[withpractice_ff]

Thanks very much!

I was starting to feel really torn at the end of Act II/beginning of Act III; Anders was starting to get so interesting, but Merrill seemed like she needed Hawke, and she was so sweet. So, yeah; naturally I thought Hawke might share my indecision. ;)

[tirtois]

This is really well done, I love it! I love the foreshadowing. Beautiful!

[withpractice_ff]

Thanks!

Ahaha, when I finished the game, I immediately came back and read over this again to make sure it seemed to fit well enough with everything that happened after. I think it works. ;)