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[withoutaday]

Edited again...no more quotes this time. More concise and to the point. Less wordy, but still wordy. Still thinking I can edit it down again. I reallly loved the word "bastion" but that "b" was such a wall that it stifled the rhythmn so I got rid of it. Oh well can't use everything.

When will the sun rise set
me free to release

O my soul
Into
the calm and cool

of daybreak

surrendering to
What we cannot see

My heart wants what my voice cannot sing

I tread white sands in the throes of midnight

Waiting

Do I hope too much for a song to be set free

These are but words