[PART 05] Dance for the Brokenhearted

[withkyulatte]

Title: Dance for the Brokenhearted. (PT 05)
Author: kyuppuccino
Pairing: Zhou Mi / Kyuhyun
Extra: R-rated (for cussing and hints of sex) / AU

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[jenlovesmi]

Snippet 5

It first starts with the end of snippet 4. Kyuhyun tells Zhou Mi to stop worrying and hides what he doesn't want to remember. Then it goes into a flashback to the time when he got the scars. He remembers Zhou Mi while he is in the ambulance, going to the hospital. He didn't want to say anything. Then his thoughts get interrupted when Zhou Mi says that he misses the younger boy. He felt it and it made him not think of anything else. I can feel the love so very much, Zhou Mi clings to him, as if Kyuhyun will go and leave again. Kyuhyun can't do anything besides remain where he was. A few seconds later, he knew he had to get the older boy away from him. It hurt so much. He told Zhou Mi to let him go. To let him go although what he wanted was the opposite. Zhou Mi repeats what he said earlier. That he can't live without him, that the pain is too much for him to bear. Kyuhyun gives up and asks him why. Zhou Mi says the small things, the moments of love, the memories the two shared together. Zhou Mi can't stand it anymore, he needs Kyuhyun. When I first read that "I'll never leave you line" I couldn't tell who was saying it. Kyuhyun got angry and grabbed Zhou Mi and thought that if he did it once, he could do it again. He doesn't want this pain, he doesn't want to feel pain as he loves someone. He told Zhou Mi that he will hurt him again and he doesn't want that. Zhou Mi begs Kyuhyun that he won't he wants this so much that he is willing to beg for it. I don't get the next sentence, I don't know what Kyuhyun was trying to say, but I think it's more like If I believed you, then I would get hurt again I don't understand the next part, so if I'm off, I apologize. Kyuhyun says that he won't let Zhou Mi in this time, he doesn't want to. Kyuhyun did what he did because he wanted to be saved, by trying to take away his life.

Sorry for the length, but I love this snippet so much. It gave me so much to think about. It made me truly read slow and pay attention to the details. Sorry for deleting comments, I think it's better this way.