The Pensieve, Part One

[witchiepooh]

Title: The Pensieve
Author: Thea Witchiepooh
Pairing/Characters: Eventually Draco/Hermione, Ron, Kingsley Shacklebolt
Rating: PG-13 for now
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter or any of these characters.
Summary: Voldemort has been defeated, but Death Eaters still plot from the shadows. Harry Potter is apparently taken captive in an attack and months later

Comments

[reetinkerbell]

:D I honestly didn't expect you to have written the first chapter as quickly as you did, but I guess I shouldn't be surprised. I'm trilled that you started where you did, rather than the night Harry disappeared or during the war or anything like that. You jump right into the story, barely passing Go, and you totally want more.

So you know what that means don't you? *innocent smile*

[witchiepooh]

So you know what that means don't you? *innocent smile*

As Winnie the Pooh would say, "Oh bother!"

What have I gotten myself into this time... :D

Yeah, yeah, I'm gonna go forward with it...but finishing Viva is top priority (and don't think I've forgotten my others including Fred/Hermione and CHEESE)...but yep, it looks like I've found my new WIP...

[witchiepooh]

LOL, and forgot to add to that... Thanks!!!! :D

[yesterday4]

Wow! And why are there question marks after TBC? Erase those question marks! lol.

I love how you started this. It was very fast moving and I actually felt a little breathless at the end. I have been wanting a story where Draco can't speak for SO long so I can't tell you how giddy this made me! *does a little dance*

Hermione and Ron were addicted to any possible information on Harry's whereabouts, like junkies jonzing for smack. And because they'd gone so long without a fix, they had become the walking dead.

I love that bit. I think what would happen to them without being a complete unit is always an interesting read. I can't wait to see what you do.

Don't even reply to this. Just gimme more!

Oh, and as ps that is completely off topic, your pictures the other day wouldn't load for me. :(

[witchiepooh]

Don't even reply to this. Just gimme more!

See, I don't know how to listen! :D

Thanks so much for the feedback. I had the question marks after TBC because I really wanted to see how folks reacted to this idea. But, as I said to Ree above, I'm in it again...opening up another can of WIP! (Though I'm gonna close the last one soon.)

And I think it's rather Freudian of you to *ahem* WANT a story where Draco can't speak. *Nods thoughtfully* :D

So yes, I will write more, your encouragement is inspiration. There are a lot of ideas I have in my head (though I'm not sure all will work) and I'm actually pretty scared because this is way out of my comfort zone.

Re: the pics... I'm not sure why you couldn't view them, they were in my scrapbook with LJ friends level security...I'll look into it, though it sounds like the problem may be on your end. At some point I may post them on my web site (a personal site, not linked here) and if you're interested I can share the link.

[chanteur_dombre]

Oh! Oh! How GOOD was this? I'm with Ree, it starts in EXACTLY the right place. Of course it's TBC! Are you crazy?

[witchiepooh]

Yup, I've done it again! And yes, I am crazy.

Thanks as always for the feedback...I intend to finish Viva before I delve too deeply in these waters (I sense this fic will be rather absorbing once I really get into it), but yes, I'm going to continue.

[chavelaprincess]

OMG!!!!

*gasps*

That was such a great opening.

I am already hooked. Way hooked.

I can't wait for the next part. I am so excited!

[witchiepooh]

Thanks for the feedback! I'm going to have to ask you to be a *little* patient just because I've got much on my plate (including finishing my other WIP which is very close to being complete) ... But I promise I will continue this, especially now that I've gotten positive input. :)

[chavelaprincess]

Okay... *sighs* If I must wait...

LOL! Just Kidding!

I'll wait patiently especially if you say it will come.

I hope you are having a good day!

[witchiepooh]

LOL, thanks!

[izzzy88]

Well, I rest assured that whatever you do - finish your other stories or continue on with this (PLEASE!) - we'll all be endlessly entertained (and thankful)! I'm on the edge of my seat for more of this little gem.

[witchiepooh]

Thanks! And yes, it seems I am destined to become caught up in a new WIP just as I finish the old one...such is life :)