[Fanfic] Red West II. - Chapter forty four

[witchann2]

Title: RED WEST II.
Author: Kasumi
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Western, Drama, Romance
Warning: AKame pairing; vulgarisms, violence, explicit content
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Comments

[niigatachan]

Yaaaay ♥ ♥ ♥

Jin is so horny :D well I don´t mind :D and I think neither Kame :D :D
I glad they "relaxed" a little and now another adventure can start :D
Liwan knows everything :D :D but that's understable :D

Thank you so much for writing :) ♥
I´m looking forward for next chapter as always :3

[witchann2]

Hello, dear! ^^/

Well, I´d be shocked if you minded horny Jin. XD XD
And Kame´s reaction to him is too predictable, right? :´D

After everything, they really needed a proper relaxation, and me too. ^^´
And Liwan is… our clever Liwan.

Thank you so much for the 1st comment. <3

[atago4]

This was certainly an interesting chapter for me

[witchann2]

Well… then I´m glad you didn´t close the window annoyed with ´such a tea´. :P :D

I appreciate your understanding for this kind of unique chapter. That place and that time had a really special meaning for the two... After everything they had been through, they certainly deserved some proper rest, but they also needed to realize the point which their relationship reached and how much it deepened.

No matter my plans regarding to the number of chapters or the actual plot, I´m always trying to hold on the natural flow of the story and this lake-part just meant to be there. So, I really didn´t write this as something ´additional´ and I´m glad you don´t take it that way.

As for Koki´s lines… They usually come to me naturally, depending on the specific scenes and stuff he reacts to. It´s not so hard to make fun of those two, even though I wouldn´t do it personally. XD
And Liwan… His role in this aspect became clear some time ago and I´m happy he fits in it.

Arigatou! Hopefully, it will help. ^^´

[seiko22]

This chapter was so nice! *_* Thank you! They really deserved some peace and quiet (and "rest"). ;)

And of course Liwan rules! :)

I´m looking forward to the final chapter!

[witchann2]

They did. ^_^´
And I´m really glad that you enjoyed it so much.

As for Liwan... So far, it´s surprisingly funny to write his parts after his ´comeback´. XD

Arigatou, Nee-chan! <3
I hope I won´t disappoint you with the ´final´. ^^v

[hilly_katara]

Hello Kasumi !!!
You have made a very special chapter <3 . <3 ...
Thanks for updating
I am happy that Kame & Jin have solved their distancing :) :) :D
They have made magic that moment, although it did not last long jejejeje
I want you to live happily together but first you must fulfill your mission .....
As I've always told you, your words wrap me in that beautiful environment!!! a lot of passion and delivery !!!!
Many thanks Kasumi, I late to write my comment, tiredness and a lot of work stopped me, but as always I love to read your writing !!!! arigatouuuuuuu!!!!!

[witchann2]

Hi, dear! ^^/

Yeah, you´re right that it was a special chapter. Kind of unusual for RW, I´d say. ^^´
Those two needed some proper time for each other, ne? And hopefully, I´ll be able to create more magic moments for them, no matter the upcoming difficulties…

Thank you, thank you so much, your praise always makes me happy.

I´m late replying, too. ^^´
It doesn´t matter, I´m glad you made it in the end.

Arigatou gozaimashita! <3

[hilly_katara]

I was expecting something like this ...
Is a very nice plus in your story !!! I expected reconciliation and it was better than I thought....Arigatouuuuu Kasumi *o*
And although they face difficulties there will always be a space for love ....
I'm looking forward to read your next adventure !!!

[janajanc]

What a lovely ending, they both deserved to spend an idyllic time together a long time ago. Oh, wait, this isn’t a final chapter, thoug I wish it would be. I guess you’ll leave us waiting for a new RW series with a cliffhanger, right? (crying)

I was shocked (together with Jin) when Kame wanted to leave his lover, but quickly relieved they resolved this problem „who deserves who“ within a short period of time - it could be much more devastating!

Now when all the boys around Akame know about their relationship they can’t avoid their little jokes and hints. I like the idea of blushing Kame and quick-tempered Jin when Liwan, Koki and Ryo implied they know very well their way of (not) resting!

In my imagination, the most sexy Akame moment was their last quickie before the other boys joined them! :)

[witchann2]

Ahoj Jani!! ^^/

I was waiting for you to appear eagerly!

Thank you so much, I´m happy you liked this chapter so much. I can imagine you´re ´scared´ of what I might do in the very last chapter of RW II., but... no promises. :P :D

Well, Kame had reasons for his internal crisis, and not only you´re happy that they overcame it with Jin so… swiftly. XD

As for the other Riders´ reactions… I just couldn´t help it; it´s really fun to mock the two of them now. :´D

And as for that… ehm, sexy scene… well, yeah, I admit that I have an urge to giggle remembering it even now. ^^´

Looking forward to seeing you under the last chapter! ^^v
Though it might take some time yet…