[Fanfic] Red West II. - Chapter thirty seven

Dec 19, 2016 09:13

Title: RED WEST II.
Author: Kasumi
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Western, Drama, Romance
Warning: AKame pairing; vulgarisms, violence
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niigatachan December 19 2016, 13:11:32 UTC
YEESSS! :D Dear I was here like 10 times a day so I´m so happy with this :D

Aww I didnt expect Jane to say that in front of everyone but it was good thing :) and everyone´s reaction was much better than I thought it will be :)
I´m really happy that Leo finally calmed dowm :) all praise Jane :D

Jin was really quick with finding out it was Grenet but hey there wasn´t other option :D

KAMEEE T°T Hang in there (sry bad words xD) I didnt expect Grenet to fight him but I think Kame dont have a chance against him alone without some help :/

I know Jin can´t know Ryo and others will come after them but really he should wait and dont be so reckless :(

I´m really excited what (bad) things will happen :D
Grenet was disgusting but I loved it :D

Thank you so much for writing Dear :* and if you wont be here later Merry Christmas ♥

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witchann2 December 22 2016, 08:39:44 UTC
I´m glad for making you happy, Niigata-chan. ^_^´

Jane took a chance and it worked out, fortunately. Leo really needed some ´help´ in this, that´s for sure.

Jin simply listens to his instincts, and moreover - there´s his connection with Kazuya, right? And… he´s just not able to sit on his hands and do nothing… Especially when Grenet is still… Grenet.

Thank you for reading and commenting, dear!

PS: Oh, I´ll be around here for sure, making some Xmas post happened to be my tradition already. ^_^

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hilly_katara December 20 2016, 02:01:54 UTC
That Beautifuuuuuuul!!!!
The last words of Jin:
  "I'm not crazy, just desperate to save him" <3 . <3
I loved it!!!! Jin is a love of man!!!!! :) :) :)
Less badly that he and Koki arrived before Grenet did anything worse to Kazuya ...
Although not for that reason Kame is sure, that plan of Jin is risky!!! this man goes to the suicide with its plans o.O I hope that Ryo runs as fast as possible and warns Leo .... and then ....
A battle will unfold wuaaaaa
The riders, Grenet and the Sioux Indians...
This will get ugly O.O
Much appreciation to Jane for calming the feelings of anger of her boyfriend and apparently each rider accepted the relation of its brother, that is encouraging...although there is a hidden past of the couple :(
Friend thank you very much for updating!!!!!

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witchann2 December 22 2016, 08:40:35 UTC
Awww, thank you!!
That last part was one of those things, which came to me so naturally, that I didn´t even realize what I wrote, until I read it again. Thanks for mentioning it. <3

Jane did her job, right? What else to expect from a woman, who can deal with those guys? :D

Well, naturally, Jin is willing to risk a lot for Kame… But I won´t comment on anything else, I don´t want to spoil anything for you.

I thank you, again! ^_^

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hilly_katara December 24 2016, 06:12:16 UTC
Your words were exact even if it came out of nowhere ....
I will be waiting to read what Jin is capable of doing for his love!!!! it's pretty!!!!
And Jane is a great woman, and the only woman in the group, intelligent and sensitive...
My friend I have nothing more that to wish you: MERRY CHRISTMAS *-* !!!
I am happy to have met you, to share my love for KAT-TUN and to enjoy reading Akame that manages to fill me with feelings <3 . <3
Thank you and happy day!!!!!!

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hilly_katara December 24 2016, 06:13:05 UTC
gomen ...I meant to say MERRY X'MAS!!!!!

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seiko22 December 24 2016, 13:57:01 UTC
Thanks for the "preliminary Christmas gift". ;)

Best reaction - Cullen´s "That explains a lot"... XD

That bastard, beating Kame again, AGAIN! >_<
(I rely on you, Jin!)

Thank you once again and I wish you Merry Christmas. ;)

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witchann2 December 26 2016, 08:38:38 UTC
You´re welcome, Nee-chan. ^^v
I was really glad that I made it before Christmas...

Well, of course, Cullen might be an old moody man, but he´s also wise, isn´t he? XD

That bastard, hmm... I know what you mean... I assume nobody is happy to see Grenet in action again...
But you can bet that Jin won´t let things be as they are.

Thanks, Sis, you know how it is with Xmas for us. ^_^

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theblackheat December 27 2016, 19:10:41 UTC
Ho,ho,ho!
Merry Xmas dear Witchann <3 :D/

You, You've been a pretty bad girl his year teasing your readers to the limit XD Did you got a nice present for it?

Well,I have to tell the truth. I was afraid you gonna get us a super angst-chapter for Xmas filled with plenty of dirty-dirty Grenet violating our pretty Kamechan('s ass). For that reason I did read only now this chapter, still pleading "Oh, please not now!No!No!No!" all the time. You're still pretty good in teasing XD
I guess we can not avoid IT. Getting out Kamechan without Grenet had some fun is impossible, isn't it? Please please promise me not to hurt our Turtle, i mean by Grenet. Not too much at least. It would be awfull to see him being ossed into depression while Jin would blame himself. That would be so typical I believe in him, he is a strong fighter. That was a nice kick at least hahaha

can't wait for more!

:D

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witchann2 December 28 2016, 11:50:29 UTC
Oh, what an unexpected surprise-appearance you made, dear Heatie!
I´m happy to ´see´ you here again! <3

Well, I must admit you´re right… In this respect, I have been a very bad girl this year. Fortunately, it wasn´t taken into consideration as came to my presents. ^^´

Then I´ll tell you the truth as well - if the chapter was so… heavy, I wouldn´t post it around Christmas time at all. I was in no mood for something like that either. But I take it as a praise that you were so ´scared´ to read it. :P :D

I cannot promise you anything right now, sorry.
(Though, I can confirm that Kame is a fighter…)

As for ´more´… I didn´t have much time (or mood) for writing recently, moreover year-end-closing period at my workplace always sucks, so it will take a while, but I really want to continue this story asap and I hope to see you again soon. ;)

Thank you for keeping RW on your mind. <3

PS: Belated Merry Xmas to you, too!!

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atago4 December 31 2016, 00:16:39 UTC
Alright, this time, I really am sorry for the delay, I know there could be excuses, but my head didn’t get into gear about Red West in last few days - what with all Christmas stuff and the like… But, I came across an idea, that some things should really be accomplished this year, and not push them into the next one ( ... )

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witchann2 January 5 2017, 16:35:56 UTC
Well… Now, I´m the one looking for excuses to be so late with my reply ( ... )

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atago4 January 10 2017, 04:31:14 UTC
Well, as you said, I know about those events, or 'excuses', as you put it, so don't worry, I don't blame you at all for replying so late ( ... )

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witchann2 January 12 2017, 13:24:40 UTC
Thanks for understanding. ^^´

Leo… I´m relieved to read that.

RW villains… I can only feel proud of my precious fanfic and say thank you so much for your praise, I appreciate it a lot.
I use ´bushes´ as well, but during the years of writing I learnt how to make even those practically useless characters interesting. It was not easy, but as I see, it paid off.

There´s absolutely nothing you should apologize for. ^_^

Arigatou gozaimasu! <3

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