[Fanfic] Red West II. - Chapter twenty four

[witchann2]

Title: RED WEST II.
Author: Kasumi
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Western, Drama, Romance
Warning: AKame pairing; vulgarisms, violence
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Comments

[masami93]

dun dun duuuuunnnnn!!!
It's good to have this story back you know? xD and damn what a comeback it was ovo
I like that Jin is getting more and more daring with Kame, that was very hot ovo I loved it and thank you for this <3
I was hoping for their little date in the barn but with what happened later I think I can only dream about it now >< darn ><
And about what happened... they were killed? that sucks D8 but luckily Jane is hopefully safe, even tho she's captured o.o I don't even want to imagine what could happen had she been hurt o.o
I somehow have a feeling that little note that Leo received might be from Grenet but I'm not too sure here... I guess I have to wait for another chapter to find out~ :D

Thank you dear and 'see' you soon ;)

[witchann2]

It´s good to have you commenting as the first. <3

Happy you liked it so much!
*have been working hard on this one*

Since they´re together for some time already, it feels like a natural development. ^^´ (Though, sometimes Jin even surprises ME. :D)
You´re very welcome, I´ve missed writing this as hell, so it was really GOOD to come back to that.

Well, sorry (not sorry) about the barn? m^_^m
As for the rest of the happenings...
*me not commenting*
Hopefully, I´ll be done with the next one "soon", so you´ll definitely find out. ;)

Thank you too, dear.
It´s always a pleasure to ´see´ you. ^^/

[masami93]

I'm actually surprised I'm the first one to comment o.o seeing as it was poster yesterday and I wanted to focus on RL stuff so I put the story aside (tho the tab with it has been opened in my browser since yesterday xD) but I decided to procrastinate yet again and RW always wins xD

Ofc I liked it! And your effort really shows :-D

Yeah, I was hoping for a cute lovely chapter seeing as it began like one but then you have to crash it again xD but I get it, it cannot be candy sweet all the time xD

I'll be waiting impatiently for future development ovo

I'm always here xD like really xD access to internet 24/7 xD having a smartphone can be both a blessing and a curse o.o xDD

[masami93]

OH! OH! Oh, oh, oh!!!!! I forgot to put one important thing in my comments namely...

WHERE'S MY LIWAN?! I WANT MY LIWAN BACK! GIMME LIWAN! HE NEEDS TO COME BACK TO THE STORY FFS! O.O

That's it xDD goodnight <3

[pinkporca]

THis chapter was great in that Jin is getting bolder and Kazuya is allowing it. At the same time, can't help but worry what is happening to Jane and the others. This is really nerve wrecking. Thanks for the update. Well done.

[witchann2]

Well, Kame has no reason to deny him, right? XD (except the threat of being exposed…)
I´ll work hard on update, so that you don´t have to deal with this nerve wrecking situation for long. ;)

Thank you for reading and comment! ^^v

[akiko_hiwatari]

Hello ^^
(No late this time, I'm getting better :D)

Jin is very impatient and he likes risk, but I went crazy almost :D Koki is funny. I understand Jin is a little jealous about him ^^
Jane... No! Jane, no :( It was unexpected, another rescue mission? What is written on the paper??

Thanks for the chapter! ^^

[witchann2]

Hello!
Good job, dear! ^^v

Jin, Jin, Jin... He seems to be a favorite topic this time. XD

Well... I´d say there will be a kind of rescue mission again, yes...

Thank you for reading and commenting!!
It´s good to see you up-to-date. ^^

[niigatachan]

Hi dear!
I´m so sorry that I´m late here :/

Walker comes and kind of destroys Governor´s plans :D nehehe :D
Another AKAMEEEEEEEEE :D
LOVE IT! :D Jin is so greedy :D but I understand that :D
how could he resist Kame? :D I totally love scenes where others could see them every minute :D
....
Whaaaaat? They´ve got Jane? NOOOOO
I hope nothing bad will happend to her :(
Also I wonder what is it written there ... but we will see in chapter I hope :)

Really amazing chapter :)
Thank you very much for writing :* as always :*

[witchann2]

Hello dear!
You´re not late at all! ^^v

Heh, it was definitely Captain´s Moment. :D

AKame... Well, hmm... I´ve missed them. ^^´
You´re right, totally understandable, who would even want to resist? XD

As for the rest... No comment.
I´m working on the next chapter, but it´s going slowly...

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
I´m here at your service. ^^

[niigatachan]

Hi dear!

I so sorry that I couldnt reply sooner but I had problem with login :( ( I was logged in with Twitter and one day I couldn´t login so for week I tried to find solution with LJ support -.- ) but it´s okay now :) finally! :D

You are so welcome my dear :*
I´m waiting for the next part :)

[sakuravocal]

Poor Jin and his JinJin XD Denied over and over again
Never gets old XDD

So happy you updated! I don't want this to end anytime soon TAT Not until Jin gets his action at least

Aww a date! It'll be so cute to read >w< Jin and Kame cuddling with a picnic and free from worries and being chased. They deserve a real break (tho they did get one the previous chap =w=)

But shit gets real quick in this fic. So many things happening at once. Without a chance to solve existing problems another ensues. Though, the buildup keeps me relieved that it's not going to end soon.

[witchann2]

I wouldn´t say that Jin was ´denied´ completely. XD

Well, I can assure you that the end of this story is nowhere sight yet; there´s still too many ideas popping up on my mind. ^^

Oh, and I definitely agree that to have such a picnic date for AKame would be very nice, but it´s hardly feasible with this western genre...

Thank you for reading and comment! ^^