[Fanfic] Red West II. - Chapter thirteen

[witchann2]

Title: RED WEST II.
Author: Kasumi
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Western, Drama, Romance
Warning: AKame pairing; vulgarisms, violence; No beta-reading
Summary: Once upon a time in the west... During the wild period of the United States formation, the two guys met, became close friends and lovers, before they had to go separate ways again... Jin is

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[masami93]

WELCOME BACK HON~~!
sorry for the late comment but well, it's your fault cause you posted it when I was on my holiday without the Internet xDD

I still feel sorry for Jane but well, there's nothing we can do about it and I hope that Leo (I always want to write Reio o.o) will come back soon~

And yay we got an Akame moment~ unfortunately it was only kissing D: but better this than nothing <3 though some hot smex scene on a pile of leaves in a forest... that would be something xD stupid Ryo and Koki for interrupting them >o<

But damn Akame 'fight' o.o poor Jin couldn't take it anymore... good thing it was a minor incident and he let it all out~ I don't want Akame to fight anymore D:

Kame's first time... riding a train xDD he has to be both nervous and excited <3 I'm not surprised they don't want to leave Kuro and Ukushi behind D: they love their horses~ but at least the blacksmith will take a good care of them? :D

Aaaaand Kame should trust his gut instinct more. It would save them a lot of trouble... damn Harvey -.-

Well, I'm waiting for more~ thank you for this one :D

[witchann2]

THANK YOU, DEAR. <3
Oh, but I´m not sorry for posting the new chapter earlier. :P I´m quite patient as comes to comments… ^_^´´ And happy to see you here, online again.
(Did you enjoy your holiday? Did you visit any foreign country?)

Jane… Well, she´s patient as well. :D
Leo/Reio… Since he uses ´Leo´ version on his twitter account himself, and it fits RW more than the real one, I decided to use it.

AKame… Exactly, be grateful for SOMETHING. Though, it will come to that hot hot HOT scene as well, eventually. It will not be on the pile of leaves, but still… I think you´ll like it. That´s not spoiling the plot, I guess. XD
But Ryo and Koki, they´re not stupid, they have no idea!! :X
And the two of them fighting… Well, it´s only natural they sometimes do not come to terms in some issues…

As for Kuro and Ukushi… I was thinking about this a lot and in the end I realized this journey would have been really demanding for both animals, so it was better to leave them behind for their own good. ^^

And Harvey on the scene… No comment.

And yes, please, keep waiting, I love your comments, and I´m quite focused on finishing the next one during the weekend. ;)

Once again, thank you, looking forward to see you again! ^^

PS: Btw, all thumbs up for your avatar. :)

[masami93]

I know you're not sorry xD I'm just upset in happened when I was gone... together with some other fics and I had a lot to read and I wanted to do it asap but I couldn't so I got frustrated and.. urgh~! xD Though now I can't stop thinking about next chapter~
I went to Italy with my friends, it was amazing~ :D

Jane sure as hell is patient, I know I wouldn't be o.o Though Kame and Jin also showed us how patient they can be when they separated at the end of RWI ^_~
Yeah, it fits the story more but I still can't help it so forgive me if I write 'Reio' from time to time - it's unintentional xD

"Something" but still not enough xD And yeah, you're not spoiling the plot but YOU'RE TEASING ME WHICH IS EVEN WORSE! D: But now at least I know that hot times will happen~ and I can't be more happy and excited for future chapters xD my pervy side is awakening o.o Too bad it won't be on a pile on leaves though xD
Ryo and Koki are loooove xDD I love those two~ you couldn't've chosen better characters for this story xD Too bad Yamapi isn't here tho D8
It would be boring if the agreed with each other all the time, about everything, wouldn't it? xD

Yeah, you're right ^_^ It would be too much for both of them :O though they could put them on train? no? okay... too bad xD I just don't like to see them separated D: but I guess I can live with that for now~ as long as they have a happy reunion at some point in the story xDD

Harvey means trouble, we all know it.

I'm always here waiting xD so yeah, during a weekend would be lovely <3 I need something to distract me from upcoming uni -.-

PS. Well thank you~ <3 I loved this photo so much I knew it has to be my avatar *o*

PS2. Remember how I told you the only western thing I've teen was 'Rango'? I remember I was also watching Lucky Luke cartoon when I was younger xDDD does it count? xD

[witchann2]

I know that frustrating feeling very well; mostly it´s connected to not being able to write in my case. D:
Heh, you can keep thinking about it whatever you like, dear, something like that makes me feel content. ^^

Italy! I´ve never been there so far... But I´d like to see Rome once. Glad you enjoyed it. ;)

Of course, I´ll forgive you for ´Reio´, don´t worry. For so awesomely long comments I´d forgive you much more than that. :D

You think I don´t realize it´s NOT ENOUGH? Maybe that I just enjoy teasing you much? XD But you know, that seems to be my problem - since they are together in the story, my own VERY pervert side is ON all the time... It´s kind of difficult to write also some ´normal´ scenes like that. :D

Yamapi... I have to admit that personally I don´t like him much and I´m afraid that if he had been alive in RW, I would have not been able to write his character objectively. So all things considered, I think it was better for him to be one of the triggers of Jin´s quest for revenge. ^^´
Anyway, I´m also satisfied with Ryo and Koki here. I was hesitant about adding more Johnny´s characters, so I was quite relieved it turned out quite well and they were accepted positively.

Oh, and I´m doing all I can for NOT making a boring RW. XD And I LOVE making distractions for my readers.

About our dear horses... Well, you can bet I will not just leave them rest at the blacksmith´s place for the rest of the story. ;)

So...
*opening a certain Word file*

PS: It´s one of my favorite Kame´s photos of this year. ^^

PS2: Lucky Luke?? Ehm, well, I think it can be considered as ´western-like´ thing. XD

[masami93]

I'm always frustrated when reading a fic cause I want to read it asap but I can't~ and then I'm sad when it's over and I want more :D
But... but... I can't keep thinking about fics all the time D: I have other things to do as well ;)

Yeah, Rome is on my list as well xD Couldn't do it this time cause we stayed in Bibione and it's too far away~ Rome is my destination for some long weekend maybe <3 But at least I've seen Venice <3 <3 <3

Good! Cause sometimes it's automatic xD like sometimes I write in English to my Polish friends and the other way around - in Polish to my foreign friends xDD (with you it wouldn't make such a difference... I mean, Polish and Czech aren't that different ^_^v)

Everyone's been teasing me recently~ D: with my friend being in Disney World... not nice~ XD When it comes to Akame my pervy side is on all the time o.o Writers' struggles xD I'll never get them seeing as I'm not a writer myself xD maybe I should try writing at some point~

Ohhhh~ I see~ okay xDD Yamapi is kind of specific xD you either hate him or love him :D tho I somehow managed to fit between xDD Like, I love him in fics when he's well written and I love some of his songs/videos with him BUT I'm not obsessed xDD tho I'd attend his concert if I could~ :D Fair enough, it's better to have him like that than badly written <3 :D
Koki and Ryo-chan will always be accepted <3 at least I will always accept them <3 I love them so much~ you did a good thing by adding them to the story :D I guess their characters are easy to work with~ tho Ryo's sarcastic character (or 'poisonous tongue') can prove to be tricky sometimes xD

You're doing a great job then~ it's not boring at all :D

Good~ I love horses, I'd love to be able to ride them D:

Yes, yes~ work my baby, work~ :D

PS. It's gorgeous~ he's so sexy and... mysterious there <3

PS2. Yup, Lucky Luke ^_^ It was set in the right time and right place :D my whole knowledge about Wild West comes from this cartoon xDD

[witchann2]

It was not often, but I remember those days I was mainly on the reader´s side as well… Sweet times. XD But you´re totally right, we cannot dedicate our lives just to fanfictions! Though I cannot imagine my life without it. ^^

Venice seems to be a very attractive place for tourists, right? Was it like you can see on TV there? :D

Ah, languages switching, tell me about it. XD Sometimes it feels like I talk more in English than in Czech.

One day, maybe you´ll get some awesome idea, which will not let you sleep until you start writing, who knows. ;) (It was like that with RW for me. :D)

Yamapi… That´s true, there were some fics, in which I liked him… And maybe also some dorama could be found to add to this list. XD
Koki and Ryo… Exactly, somehow it is not so difficult to write about them as I had been worried. :D

THANK YOU. ^^´

I´m trying hard… ^_^v

[masami93]

Yeah, I already spend too much time on facfics... if not reading them then maybe beta-ing them (which is also a form of reading o.o) or thinking about them xD other parts of my life suffer because of it xD

On TV hmmm? Not really sure, I don't remember the last time I've seen Venice on TV tbh xD But well, it's beautiful~ lots of smaller and bigger bridges and lots of canals, narrow alleys, old buildings, gondolas <3... and a shitload of tourists -.-

Same here xD or well, in my case it's 'I write more in English than in Polish' xD sometimes I can't seem to use my native language properly o.o like grammar rules, proper words... well xD

I'm a shitty writer so it'd have to be a masterpiece and a whole plot would have to come to me at once xDD

I love him in most of the fics <3 :D Buuuut... he's not such a good actor o.o He was amazing in Nobuta and in Algernon but otherwise all his roles are the same for me xD
It's not hard because they're looooove xDD ^_^

I know you're trying~ I don't doubt it xD

[witchann2]

Totally understand... I do some beta-reading from time to time as well and I have to say that my writing suffers then. XD

Venice.. Oh, I bet it was really beautiful. I hope to get there once... Though, I´d skip the crowds of tourists...

Heh, sometimes I forgot how to say something in Czech, but I know the words in English! It´s kind of scary, isn´t it? :D

Yeah, I totally agree with Nobuta. And he was not so bad in Code Blue. But I haven´t seen many of his TV works, actually, so probably I can´t tell if he´s good or not.

:D
Now I must work, but this evening... I suppose I will move on a little. ;)

[masami93]

In my case everything else suffers when I do some beta-reading xD

Yeah, if you want to see the most important places then I don't think it's possible to skip the tourists -.- unless you go there in winter I guess? xDD though I have to admit, the further you are from Piazza San Marco the less tourists you see xD

It is~ especially when it happens when I'm talking to my mum -.- she doesn't know English so it makes it so much harder -.- it's not a problem when I'm talking with my friends though xDD

Code Blue was nice <3 but well, similar character to some of his other dramas... or at least he always has the same face there xDD

It's better to work even a little bit then to not work at all I guess :D