[Fanfic] Red West II. - Chapter four

[witchann2]

Title: RED WEST II.
Author: Kasumi
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Western, Drama, Romance
Warning: AKame pairing; vulgarisms, violence; No beta-reading
Summary: Once upon a time in the west... During the wild period of the United States formation, the two guys met, became close friends and lovers, before they had to go separate ways again... Jin is

Comments

[patrycja444d]

So quickly! <3 <3 <3 Thank you for the new chapter!

Hm... somehow I would call it 'calm before the storm', haha. :)

I don't have much to say today but I'm a little sad that Koki went his way for now (I hope he will come back, soon ;3)

I wonder what's going on with Leo and Black Riders, and the wanted poster.

Can't wait for the next part! Great work! :3

[witchann2]

You´re so quick as well, dear! :D

Well, I admit that you´re very right in what you´ve said. The happenings are just setting into motion…

I will spoil a little - yes, Koki will be back soon. ;)

There is a lot to explain about Black Riders; I will do my best! I wonder if I should use some flashbacks for it or not…

Thank you for your praise so much! <3
The comments like yours are what push me to continue. ^^

[niigatachan]

Yay another chapter :D you are so fast ! ♥
I´m a little bit sad that Koki and Kame separated so soon but I believe Koki will join story again :)
Jin ran off without paying? Uff I would be mad but he is baka so it can´t be helped :D
So Kame pack all Jin´s things and meet already :D I can´t wait :D

I expected some action on end with Kame on bed,someone will come and something bad will happend but that´s just me and my stupid imagination :D

It´s still 4th chapter and I am impatient so don´t mind me :D :D :D

Thank you for writing ♥

[witchann2]

I try to use every opportunity I have for writing, as I´m (once again) starting to be consumed by this story. But I have to warn you¨- there will be probably some little gap now - too busy for the two upcoming weeks. :/

I´m glad you´re so happy, anyway. ^^´

Your assumption is correct - Koki will be back very soon. ;)

Well, Jin thought that he would come back that day and it was not necessary to pay yet, but since he left with the Riders to Leadville… But I guess you´re right; he doesn´t exactly think about any possible debts in Denver at all now. XD

Huh, what bad action? Don´t be such a grouch! I don´t have to be nasty on my characters all the time, do I? :D

Well, it seems there will be quite a lot of chapters of RW II. So far I think that not so many as in the first part, but as I know myself it will get longer and longer… :D
Hope you will keep being impatient. :P

Thank you for commenting. <3

[niigatachan]

Of course, you also have things that you must do like everybody :) so take your time! I´ll be waiting :)

Yay Koki ♥ I´m looking forward then :)

Sorry about "bad action" I´m such a mean person xD
but I love bad things happend to my favorite characters :D you know that tension and feeling that you don´t know if there would be happy ending :D I´m too fast with this :D But I´m happy there will be a lot of chapters yay :D
I´m glad that I will have what to read for some time :)

Thank you for replying and good luck with whatever will keep you busy next weeks xD :*

[witchann2]

Really glad to hear that. <3

Yeah, I know what you mean. It´s kind of... exciting to write about the scenes like that as well. And it doesn´t necessarily mean I´m so evil. XD

Thank you, dear!
The thing is I usually don´t have much time for writing during the working days, so I try to make a use of the weekends, but the last one I attended an otaku convention and as for the next one I´m looking forward to a little friends-reunion so... ^^
But I will be back at RW II. asap, I promise.

[seiko22]

Thank you for such a nice pre-gift as well as thank you for the others gifts. :) (especially for a certain CD/DVD) XD

I´m glad that Akanishi brothers have such a good relationship, it´s fun to read their interactions.
I´m so curious what happened with Leo and the gang...

Hurry up and update, ok?! :P

[witchann2]

You´re welcome, sis.
To make you happy - that was the primary goal of all the gifts.
Can´t wait to check out THAT DVD as well. XD

Glad you like Akanishi brothers; it´s a little unusual to write their scenes, as I was used to Jin-Kame interactions only so far, still it´s a fun. ^^

I will focus on the explanation of the Black Riders history soon, so you´ll find out. ;)

I´m trying, but you know it better than anyone - busy weekends mean less time for ANYTHING.

Thank you, Nee-chan. <3

[akiko_hiwatari]

Dnes s dovolením napíšu komentář česky, protoze čtu v mobilu a nedovedu si představit, jak tady přepínám mezi googl translatorem a LJ :D
Leo se mi zamlouvá, přijde mi sympatický a vypadá jako takový klasický mladší zlobivý brácha. Jsem zvědavá, co s ním bude dál :)
A Kame už je s hledáním tak blízko! Úplně vidím, jak Jin přijde do svého pokoje a Kazuya mu tam bude spát v posteli... Nebudu spekulovat, půjdu si to radši přečíst :)

Děkuju za další kapitolu a omlouvám se za zpoždění se čtením.

[xiochermm3]

I didn't see the pic before! is was a huge city ... poor Kame-chan how can he found Jin in this big scenario.

[witchann2]

It really was, even at that time.
And Kame will try hard, you can bet. XD

I´m looking forward to more comments from you, dear. ^^v