[Fanfic] Red West - Chapter eight

[witchann2]

Title: RED WEST
Author: Kasumi
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Romance, Drama, Western
Summary: The life on Wild West is nothing for weaklings... Is there any space for values as friendship and love?
Warning: AKame pairing; vulgarisms; No beta, I´m really sorry for any mistakes...
Thank you: To

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seiko22

[witchann2]

*Spot for Nee-chan :)

Re: seiko22

[seiko22]

You took time with this chapter but it was worth it. :)

It´s great how you paid attention to the smallest things (such as the noisy sparrow :D). It makes this fanfiction something more.

Poor Kame... This Karnaka guy is really big son of a bitch, right?! We don´t know him yet, but I fucking hate him...

Somehow I´m glad that it was cold at night so they could snuggle and warm each other. :)

Thanks for the update, nee-san.

Re: seiko22

[witchann2]

Arigatou, Nee-chan!
Such a nice comment you created. :D

Well, I wanted to write something what would be worth waiting for from the very start. XD I´m so glad I accomplished that so far. That counts for details too - I think they are always important part of each story and I´m really happy when somebody appreciates my efforts. ;-)

Karnaka… Well, he will be introduced in person quite soon, but I think everybody is able to imagine him quite well now. :/ When for example Grenet is what he is, what his boss can be like?

And AKame snuggling… XD I think that even though this part was short, everybody enjoyed it, ne? ;-)

You´re welcome, I´m working on the next so I hope I can update soon!

theblackheat

[witchann2]

*Spot for Heatie :)

Re: theblackheat

[theblackheat]

YAtta! :D/
I was waiting soooo patiently :3 and it was worth :D I loved the beginning when you described the scene and the bird making a noise. I almost thought they will use the old house, but no, they slept under the sky :) slept under the sky under the blankets ... attached.... :DDDDDDDDD
thank you but you made me want the next chapter morrreeee haha
I'm so sure the will have some trouble with the bear hunting. lol

Re: theblackheat

[witchann2]

Thank you, dear!!
I´m relieved you´re patient with me, I was doing my best. :)

I think it´s always good to describe the scene somehow, before putting the actual happenings into it, so that readers can imagine it better, ne? ;-)

Well, I can say that the old house will be used in the future, too. But sleeping under the open sky is more romantic. XD

I´m happy you liked it so much, this is great encouragement for me to keep writing!
And you´re right... Certain bear will appear in the next chapter... ;-)

*hugs*

[pinkporca]

Sleeping at the end does not bode well for both of them. thanks for the update. Can't wait for more.

[witchann2]

There is no reason to be so pessimistic. :D

You´re welcome, thanks for comment!!

[silverrain184]

Yay, an update!
So happy they're getting closer. I hope they cuddle up into each other in your sleep because they subconsciously already know they're attrackted. That would be great to wake up to ;)

I love those small things like them leaning into the other's personal space. Great tension.

And it's nice to see Kame opening up to Jin.

Lol @ Jin, he doesn't quite seem to know what he got himself into. He'd be grizzly lunch without Kame.

Thanks for the update. Can't wait for more

[witchann2]

I was working hard to update this weekend and I´m glad I made it. :)

The possibility of cuddling together... Well, we´ll see in the next chapter, I´ve already written part of it. :D

That tension is something what I enjoy the most, so I will keep building it up.

It was about time for Kame to trust Jin more, I think. Especially when they are about to do quite dangerous thing. :)

Heh, that´s our dear baka Jin, ne? XD And you´re completely right, without Kame´s help, he would be lost. :D

Thank you so much!!
I´m working on the continuation!

[prettyorianna]

I'm glad Jin let the mother with cubs go even though it's taking a while to get another bear. Hopefully they'll find the one leaving the tracks and not the other way around.