[fic] Violent Tendancies | CSI: Miami | Eric/Ryan

[wishmaster_kami]

Title: Viloent Tendancies [2/3]
Fandom: CSI: Miami
Characters/Pairing: Eric/Ryan
Rating: PG-13...Language
Word Count: 1,320
Warnings/Spoilers: Just nailed, but that's an infamous episode now lol
Disclaimer: I do not own, and I make no money from this
A/N: Wow, I got alot more comments on the first part than I had expected! Well, I'm glad everyone's

Comments

[wishmaster_kami]

Yeah, writting this was just emotional. It may have helped that I was in a similar situation while writing it lol

You know what, I had actually debated about leaving that line in, or taking it out, but now I'm glad I left it!

I'm glad you're liking it thus far.

[alligator138]

It's so clever when one chapter can make you angry at a character and the next can make you sympathise. You've done it brilliantly here! *applauds*

[wishmaster_kami]

*blushes* Why thank you Alli, you're such a sweetheart!

It's good to hear though, because those are the reactions I was hoping to get. Now I must figure out how to properly end it, that's the hard part o.O

[akari_hayashi]

*dies* This is just so heart-wrenching, but now that we can see a resolution, I can see pretty skies in front of our boys. =) Meant to be. You are really mighty fine in describing emotions.
And yay for the new spell check! \o/

[wishmaster_kami]

Why thank you, I do try my best at it. I'm glad you like it^^

*dances* Spell check FTW...though there's still mistakes that I saw afterwards ^^;;;

[thefieldmouse]

The first one was just so angty and heartbreaking, and I loved it. :) I like this one too now that they've finally let down their barriers, and Eric's finally realizing what he's been doing. Nice job!

[wishmaster_kami]

Thank you^^

Hopefully the third installment will be as loved as these first two

[csi_kat]

wow this was incredible. Your writing is always very moving.

[wishmaster_kami]

Thank you, I do try my best to get emotions to really jump out. Dunno why, I just like to do that lol