ficpost: "Senseless"

[wisdomeagle]

Title: "Senseless"
Author: Ari
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Pairing: Veronica/Lilly
Other Pairings Mentioned: Lilly/Logan, Lilly/Meg
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Backup for sexonastick in femslash06.
Summary: In a different world, Lilly's still got Veronica asking questions that can't be answered.
Wordcount: 1113

Comments

[wisdomeagle]

Hee. Me too. Oh, I wish, I wish, I wish I could write plot!

Thanks much.

[rogueslayer452]

Oh, I like this! AU Veronica Mars has tons of possibilites, and this piece was quite riveting. I could just hear the power in each of the character's voices, especially Lilly's. The Veronica voice was spot-on, as well; I can actually hear her voiceover if this really happened in the show.

[wisdomeagle]

Thank you! I too really love the AU Vmars possibilities, and I'm really glad you liked the voices -- I was worried about that (especially the voiceovers).

[fuschia]

This is very hot, and very in character all around...I love the reversals here, and how well you've captured the VMVO and Lilly's general bitch-fabulous self.

This line in particular is wonderful:

Lilly, like the rest of the life she used to have, seemed like a crazy carnival dream that had stopped suddenly with Veronica stranded at the top of the ferris wheel with nowhere to fall but down.

[wisdomeagle]

Thank you so much.

I think that line is my favorite too.

[sweetvalleyslut]

Dude, your Veronica voice is *perfect.* And the line about Lilly killing herself to avoid drinking legally--SO Lilly. Well done.

[wisdomeagle]

Eek! Thank you so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed.

[alixtii]

A fascinating universe.